...And then the black dragon attacked

Great story, would have loved a more happier ending but story started as a downer and ended like a downer and honestly this is probably my favorite story with Serena in it, can't seem to stand the other ones, I feel like the others are to lovey dovey and don't really have any development...or maybe I'm just crazy but either way loved your story

I'm looking forward to seeing how you end this. Hopefully Serana will be fine.

Keep going it is getting good.

good

Your to hard on yourself, you are doing a great job, keep going.

Keep going it is getting good.

The story is pretty good. I don't understand it doesn't get the attention it deserves

Loving it so far. :D

Pureblood vampires can go out on lesser and mixed-up vampires

Story was great, apart from the shitty development, or rather lack there of, of Serana and Mortis' relationship. And then you seemingly killed Mortis' off for no reason at all. Was I supposed to feel something other than the "wtf was that" moment I had when he died?

Awesome, dude. You made the vampire threat seem like it was a serious threat instead of just another day in the life for the physical god that is Dovahkiin.

Just came across your story a little while ago and I think it's great. The idea of a non-dragon born protagonist works better than the actual dlc. While having a godlike protagonist makes for a fun game, it cuts the tension on a narrative. A shame it seems to be unappreciated. As for the ending, a proper tragic ending seems to fit the overall tone of the story.

this is pretty good. you have basicly a normal npc trying to be a hero and his gear and abilities reflect that. a welcome change from other fanfics. keep it up

It's a fun read that is consistent in pacing and doesn't focus on only a single subject of a story which I like.