omg omg please update more this is soooo cute 3 LOVE IT 3

I hope you continue this super amazing work of art!

I love the way how it freely goes, i don't how to explain it.

"aye";p
really,really good
really, really want u to update ASAP:)

Update!

This was really really beautiful *sobs pathetically cause my love life will never be this successful*

Please, please, please continue soon!

Write the next chapter. right now. I wanna know what happenssssssssssssssssss

Omg they are both so cute! I loved reading this! :D

KYAAAAAA SO CUTEEE *dies from cuteness ooverload* the was so cute god I love it! Good job on the chapter and I hope you update soon! :D

This... is so cute. It's definitely one of the most adorable and fluffiest fanfictions I've read in a good while. You write very well, with good grammar and spelling and everything. Everything flows well and comes together nicely. I must say that Natsume's confession to Mikan is hands down the sweetest way to confess ever. Keep on writing! :)

One of the best fanfics ever! Keeps the characters' personalities yet there is still a twist I'm unable to make out and being the grammar nazi that I am, your grammar is almost perfect. The word choice and your vocabulary? Beautiful and flawless.

Me encanto tu historia enserio actualiza pronto.

Hi! I read your story just know and I have to say that I think it's really good and I absolutly love it. I think in the first chapter were too much details which weren't important and I skippes some parts but the amount of details in the second chapter was just right. Also I think that Natsume is a bit OOC but it fits with the story because in this universe aren't any alices and Natsume doesn' t have to act completly like in the origin story and so on... Anyways I can't wait for the next chapter and read how Mikan reacts XD
Bella

aw this ffn is absolutely adorable; it's a delight to read. I can't wait to see how you'll develop the plotline as you go on- can't wait for the next chapter!