So Jane and Alec turned on their masters. Too bad they didn’t think that one through. Lol. Perfect ending, I really enjoyed this one.

Well if that wasn’t crazy amazing! I always hated how understated Meyer made Jasper’s gift when it could have been so much more. And Bella’s? As a vampire and years down the road? Unstoppable

Well hell, how is she supposed to find him if she can’t remember him?

Well that was completely unexpected! I likes it! I wonder how pissed Jasper will be that they not only turned her, but it was Garrett that did so.

So they were in on this, on bringing them together. I mean, betrayal sucks but...Jasper is a stubborn ass. So now what? He runs away? Like a dumbass? But what was with Edward’s emotions? And his desire to keep Peter and Charlotte away from Bella?

So early, but just by a year. Wonder if the Cullens are in Forks

So she goes with Charlie earlier? Poor kid, losing someone you love that much hurts

Poor Jasper, poor boy doesn’t know he can’t fight fate. He may not meet her when he’s supposed to the first time, but he will meet her. I just hope she doesn’t come to him as broken as he seems to be.

This was a fun look into the beginning, with the twist of them not being mates makes it interesting. I thought for a second she might be Edward’s but that doesn’t seem to be the case.

So he knows she isn’t his. I have a feeling Peter’s feeling is that, while Jasper may readily let Alice go, I don’t think she’ll readily let him go

good story, i really liked it.

i like this rose, she's much more compassionate to bella if only for jasper's sake. well thought out plan for bella's death too.

good start, this sounds like it will be interesting if jazz remembers alice isn't his mate.

This was sad at first but happy at the very ending.

I loved this story