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   KenjiHatoyama chapter 5 . 7/20 That's an amazing story. Never read anything like that and honestly I really enjoyed it. I know that The last uptade was over a year but I hope that you would continue this story |
| Smiley-Nami chapter 5 . 9/7/2019 This is good. Continue when you can. |
| fluffypuppies chapter 5 . 8/22/2019 You got yourself an interesting story there! I love it so much and I can't wait for the next chapter! For a second there, I thought Luffy was going to change the future and actually save Ace, but alas he time-travelled again. Are we going to have a chapter where he goes back even further to the parts of when it was just the ASL brothers, or maybe even the day Shanks made that promise with Luffy? Either way, what a wonderful story! Looking forward to what you have in store for this |
| Skyla579 chapter 5 . 4/27/2019 I just found this story and I love it! I’m gonna be selfish for now but I don’t care: please continue! |
| chenchuuu chapter 5 . 1/15/2019 You, yes you! You need to continue this bcs the plot is interesting...I wonder whether there will be pairing or not? |
| TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 1 . 1/14/2019 Hmmmm. |
| The voice of all things chapter 5 . 1/13/2019 This story is such a roller-coaster ride, I love it! I'm so glad you are continuing, thanks for the chapter! |
| The voice of all things chapter 4 . 1/13/2019 Poor Luffy can't catch a break! I like the excitement of not knowing where he'll wake up next, but I do hope he gets some time with the present day crew again. I bet they're going crazy with worry. |
| The voice of all things chapter 3 . 1/13/2019 Wow he's time traveling all over the place lol. I wonder if his physical body is disappearing too or if it's just his mind getting sent all over the place. |
| BromStormrider chapter 5 . 1/13/2019 This reminds me of the movie Premonition, where the woman is constantly thrown around in a timeline and tries to prevent her husbands death. It's very chilling when Luffy knows Ace will die but goes back to when he's alive. I hope you keep updating this. |
| TheDeterminedProcrastinator chapter 5 . 1/13/2019 This is great! You had me hanging on every word and moment in anticipation of what would happen next. |
| The voice of all things chapter 1 . 1/13/2019 Wow, I wonder what happened! The rest of the crew aren't going to take this well I'm sure. Great start! |
| Vi-Violence chapter 5 . 10/13/2018 Is he going back in time in reverse chronological order, or is it random? |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/24/2018 this story is really confusing. So confusing I couldn't stop reading lol. I like it. But I am trying to figure out what exactly the plot of this story is... Or the goal of this whole amnesia Time travel thing. I mean he only got one memory back in all of the places he was transported to. The places are so out of order that I have no Idea why he was even sent there in the first place... I'm just so confused. |
| Woezy chapter 1 . 8/1/2017 don't abandon this story please! it's amazing and i want to know what happen next |
