A really well written fic with some amazing antagonists and concepts! Hope to see it continued soon!

/Okay, you did mess up and use "former," when you clearly meant to use "latter" in Nabiki's internal monologue at the beginning.

/Well, that was unexpected.

/Funny how some reviewers are harping on the simile order thing. I agree that it generally should go in respective order, but people don't always talk properly, and it's clear what he means by the context.

/In fact, I've probably heard the reverse-order comparison more often than the same-order version in real-life.

/Details like that are imlortant to pedantic people and us as outside observers. However, people in context often don't care what those outside of the situation understand about it. Especially extradimensional voyeurs. XD

/Ranma's enemies are suffering and Ranma is not. This isn't Ranma 1/2, it's Ranma 1 Fool! I mean full. XD

/Your Kasumi isn't even really ooc, either. She's kind of a bitch in canon at times.

/I worry for this generation that don't know vocabulary outside of disney movies. I was surprised that Genma was the one that suggested the adjective, though.

/Is Tofu really that badass? I don't really recall him being that good from the manga or anime, but maybe I'm jist forgetting.

/The Amazon twins make me want to read a story where Ranma has an Amazon!harem.

/Hm, call me crazy, maybe I'm grasping at straws here, stop me if I'm wrong, but it seems like you're not too fond of Kasumi, amirite? Just a feeling I have.

/Oh yes, I'm really looking forward to next chapter. I really dislike how even when Ranma has a better rapport with Akane, P-chan still mucks it up.

/It seems like you're not going to follow that unfortunate trend, so I'm glad.

/Hm, I don't see lesbian Nabiki and Akane a lot. Then again, I don't read that many Ranma fics. There's usually some stupid detail that diminishes my interest in most of the fics I start to read. Or sometimes the writer says the characters are smarter than canon, or smart at all, but doesn't show any increased intelligence. (Usually because the writer is pretty stupid.)

/The other reason is people's versions of romance seem to require too much rampant stupidity. It was funny when Rumiko did it, but we don't need a never-ending story of will-they-won't-they à la Inuyasha in fanfiction. Or, at least, I don't.

/Honestly, I always liked Nabiki a bit, even if I disliked some parts of her character. The fandom only made it worse because she can be a decent match for our old boy(girl).

/I said that to say that I like it when she isn't immediately taken out of the running, even if ultimately she isn't picked.

/You're a horrible person. All these beautiful unfinished stories, you have. I was looking through my alerts list and decided to check your profile, only to behold several great stories that I had started reading at separate times; not completely realizing that they come from the same author.

/To make it all worse, I couldn't resist starting to read this one, and now I'm hooked!

/The slightly better/worse partnis that you actually work in all your stories, so eventually, there will be some complete stories. If we all live long enough.

/I'm kinda joking, but also kinda not.

Thnkks for writing!

Interesting Fic, I like this version of the Tendo sisters. Hope you eventually update this, but your other Fics are just as good if not better.

Curious why you just don’t call Ranma’s martial arts Anything Goes. It’s shorter and more descriptive of what it is all about.

So... did you abandon this project?

If the gender equality rambling was a bit less then the story wouldn't have been too force . The characters would be human with greyish worldview not black and white .

I hope that this story will continue onward when you have time for it. This ia one of the few Ranma stories I actually like.