Excellent storey!

Love this story so I just had to read it again.

Thats really to bad its not like Oliver didn't notice or need it. A good swift kick in the ass might have helped.

Awesome story. I actually love the way you ended. While I have recently grown fond of the Bruce/Felicity pairing, I def enjoyed the fact that she chose herself over the boys. Great job and thanks for writing this excellent story for the rest of us to read.

Love Bruce and Felicity together.

Very well written. I even liked the ending(s). I'm not normally a fan of the bat, but I did like how you wrote him and how he treated Felicity. Thank you

Rereading this in June 2016 and looking back over what's happened in show, I'd still take your Felicity choosing herself and then ending up with Bruce. Thank you again for sharing this.

Loved it. Thank you!

Very well written. Although personally I can see the alternative endings going another route but that's just me.

I think it's great that you didn't rush any relationships just because in the end because really the two men just aren't ready and it'll just feel forced.

Hope to read more of your work in this fandom

That moment an Olicity shipper has to concede that in this story (and for this story only) it's looking like Felicty is much better of with Bruce. And I'm actually rooting for them

What a wonderful and imaginative story, I really enjoyed reading it and found the ending very satisfying!

Think this is a great fic. Exciting and funny in the write places. Love how you depicted Felicity's relationships. I would like to say, against the criticism that Felicity is OOC, that I disagree. Felicity has demonstrated she very independent and very firmly makes her own decisions on important matters. That, along with her clear, logical way of thinking makes me think she's more likely to give the Bat the benefit of the doubt when considering if he's friend or foe rather than deciding her 'loyalties are to Oliver' which would essentially mean she accepts everything he says without question, which would make her out of character. Once Bruce has admitted he's the Bat, the bond of trust this builds between them coupled with Oliver's repellent/overbearing means it makes perfect sense she's on better terms with Bruce throughout their investigation.

I would say one thing against this fic- I didn't really like the ending. The HIVE plot felt kinda simplistic in the end, and was resolved even more simply. Isabel carrying Oliver's child was a good twist, but apart from that the defeat of HIVE and their scheme came as an anticlimax. The resolution of the Felicity/Oliver/Bruce triangle was better, though I do feel that that too was basically summed up in one chapter, though I do like that neither Olly or Bruce are the firm victor for now.

All in all, very good work. Faving story now.

While I think that the ending was amazing, I want to know what happens to Isabel Rochev and if she is I deed carrying Oliver's baby and If she is, what about that? What about the baby? I really just wanted to know a bit about that.

Loved this story. Will always be a fan of Oliver/Felicity but found myself rooting for Bruce/Felicity.

I really liked the story. I think the plot was really good and well developed. You say no one liked the ending, but I loved it. She chose herself and that's the best choice she could've ever done.

And last, but definitely not less important: I LOVED the title. As soon as I read it, I caught the Star Wars reference and knew that I had to read your story.