This is very well done! Your transitions between the past and the present were well executed and didn't feel out of place! Very well written!

T-T I need to stop reading feels. You write the good bad feels.

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More Freezerburn pls

Wow...just wow. This really embodies the feeling of guilt and remorse. This definitely needs more recognition. A truly great story.

That was so amazing...and so sad...

This was just... wow. I'm not sure words can even do this piece justice. Your writing was very fluid and you captured the moment, the characters, everything, really well. Right in the feels. Lol. Wow. This piece was just awesome. :)