Reviews for Together Alone
Guest chapter 4 . 11/3/2019
Can you edit these chapter and put whose POV we're reading from. Cause I have to start reading, look for hints as to whose POV it is, then when I eventually figure it out, I go back to the beginning of the chapter.
The story's great so far, it's just annoying that I did know who's POV it is
STORYRAPZ chapter 3 . 5/12/2018
glas merlot
gras en zo
pakje room
bladviool
macht friveau
standaard dood
acht met chroom
peace
Bert chapter 2 . 5/12/2018
Hey Lotte,

Ik waardeer je vooruitgang enorm, ik herinner me nog dat je vroeger, in Oostende, bij ons op de veranda in je blocnootje zat te schrijven en zelfs toen wist ik dat er eindeloos potentieel in je verborgen zat. Janneke zit naast me en is ook heel erg enthousiast, ze wil je vertellen dat er altijd een extra hoofdstuk is om te schrijven om. Een happy ever after bestaat niet, zelfs na het avontuur zijn er vertelwaardige evenementen.

We kijken uit naar je nieuwe HOOFDSTUK!
XxAniMEGurllX chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
lulz\

literalluy mea

liek the wawy the chawrcter is like thignfing and everyinrgn ist liekv allt thev tinsd I fdfo. Ive NVeer realted togf a ccheareter so mcuh beefor.
dampish chapter 13 . 7/14/2016
Don't let them in don't let them see...
Be the good girl you always have to be
Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 26 . 6/27/2016
Love it.
supercode chapter 26 . 10/13/2015
Great story! Looking forward to reading a sequel!
Lady Brookelle chapter 26 . 10/11/2015
...Sequel? Please?
Lifes Rich Pageant chapter 24 . 9/21/2015
cute story! hope you update soon! :)
JaliceJelsa4eva chapter 23 . 8/28/2015
Whaaaaaaa
JaliceJelsa4eva chapter 21 . 3/26/2015
It still gets me when carl kills that boy. PS RIP Noah
Pluv143000 chapter 4 . 10/28/2014
This is a pretty good story so far...
But you switch between their points of view a lot, sometimes even within a paragraph, and have no indication when doing so so if you did that it would be a lot smoother to read
shika93 chapter 21 . 10/23/2014
Great chapter.
shika93 chapter 18 . 10/23/2014
Ha, good chapter.
shika93 chapter 17 . 10/23/2014
Awww, great chapter!
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