The ending was...

Finally! Someone who found names worthy enough for Jace and Clary.

i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & I love Clary & Jace together & I am happy that Clace, Sizzy & Malec have kids

Reading the words "Just you wait" made my mind go right to Hamilton...What has my life come to?

I like the story. And I'm kind of mad that you didn't continue. :/ when you get people saying stuff like this it means that they really like it. So please continue.

It's aurevoir not avior ;)

First, great work and I'm glad we get to see what's happening to Jace, Izzy, Magnus, etc. Second, they all seemed a bit...cheery. Not really that sad or worried. You say Jace is extremely worried, but he's not showing it too much. Shouldn't their lives, his especially, be in shambles, or more affected than "I'm bored and I just want to hear her voice again"? Third, I think it is highly unlikely that Jocelyn and Luke would stay in Idris for council business when their daughter is in a COMA. Then later you say that they come everyday and sit by her bedside. A bit confused but oh well, nice job.

Okay, this seems like a good story. Two things: first of all, it was a bit odd that Clary grasped the situation so quickly. It seemed unrealistic. Second, let me tell you, your chapters are not short at all. Pretty long actually. Thanks for informing us about the time differences between Clary's alternate universe and Jace's real world.

cant wait for the next chapter! Your TMI stories are awesome!

I will bare with you till the end of the earth I love this story! hope it gets sorted soon x

:)

Love the glitter incident SO funny, rofl

UPDATE! Please

I loved I please update soon

Love it . Continue to update!