| Reviews for Whitlock |
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   pjsmom520 chapter 22 . 6/10 Come back soon. I really enjoy this story and would like to see it finished. |
| Roxhall1 chapter 22 . 1/31 more please update soon |
| Roxhall1 chapter 22 . 10/13/2019 is it finished? is there more? |
| momma2fan chapter 22 . 6/23/2019 Love it...are you going to finish? |
| jazzysgirl35 chapter 22 . 6/11/2019 Love love love it |
| Tania Game chapter 22 . 5/4/2019 Loved this story. love that Alice and Jasper did not abandon Bella. Enjoy Peter and Bella together. |
| Guest chapter 22 . 4/28/2019 KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ |
| celajwhitney chapter 11 . 1/28/2019 how dare esme blame jasper for something that is not any of her family blindingly following edward, who is an immature teenager is ridiculous. |
| celajwhitney chapter 4 . 1/27/2019 about damn time! |
| celajwhitney chapter 1 . 1/27/2019 this is what it should have didn't get a fair shot in the books and edward was an immature dolt playing at being a grown up. jasper had to have been much more mature than edward, simply because of his life experiences before he was turned. |
| 1tinac chapter 22 . 12/11/2018 Great stort. I like Bella and Peter. |
| andrewpine chapter 1 . 12/2/2018 Not finished ,why? |
| the newest daughter chapter 22 . 6/10/2018 Please update soon. Want to see how and what they do in life |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2018 Não entendi |
| GeezerWench chapter 1 . 3/11/2018 I have a hard time with Alice. At least she's not being so damn obnoxiously pushy. |
