Well, if you ever publish a romance novel, I think I'm going to get it. The pacing was really nice, which is so much harder than it looks with this kind of thing.

Cute!

Brilliant! Its so tasty, mmm)
Many thanks to the wonderfull author!

mmmmm, nice and sexy...exactly how I like my lemons. X3

XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD! oh Kid...you and your love of symmetry

i love this so much and he is thoughtful *huge smirk present*

a cold shower is needed if you want to read this book

man hot steamy sex oh how i wonder how he would fuck

Wow, you are really good at this lemony erotic stuff! Most people only make their characters go for one paragraph from the point of entry but you kept it going and did a good job of describing it. Good Job!

Ok so did you steal this from the fairy tail one of did the fairy tail one stell it from you which is highly unlikely

I've read the story as well. And I must say that this is bit TOO close to the original...

Okay that was a great story and very well written... and to be perfectly honest, incredibly sexy. You are a great writer.

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I re read some really good parts and oh my god, eeeeeeeeeeee! So much fan girling right now

Loved it! Well Written!

This was adorable! The little conversation at the end was kind of awkward but I loved the rest :)