Awwww... What an ending!

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yep, I don't remember this but I am enjoying what you have written here and I am looking forward to going back and rereading what you have already written also looking forward to more when you can. try not to let negative readers bother you. you can please some of the people some of the time and all but you can't please everyone all the time. there are just some people who are determined to drag others down to their level. I know it is easier said than done but try to let it roll off you like water off the back of a duck. I guarantee that for every negative review there are several people who enjoyed it. : )

Hi. I love this story! Please update soon.

it is too bad you stopped this. I was wondering if the apocalypse they were going to NY to stop was the attack by the Chitauri in Avengers and how Oliver finds out about her abilities. I was hoping to see some Steve Buffy and Faith Clint goodness also I was hoping Felicity would meet someone else who she could love who would actually put her first. I do feel like there are way too many characters to keep track of. but that could be me. I don't know all the shows you are crossing.

I Love your story please continue. It has been too long (3 years).

I just found this story and I love it! I hope you'll continue it

oh my god i love this story i hope you continue it

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

I really like the premise of this story, and your writing is strong. I would just advise you to approach the flash back with a little more balance, perhaps glimpses into the present, because multiple chapters of in depth, detailed backstory can weigh the reader down, and feel like almost a tangent to the story, like the reader was pulled in with one story line, only to have to get through a massive amount of past before the premise turns back up again. That's why books and TV shows often stagger the flashbacks among the present story to avoid weighing it down too much.
The story is great but its not really moving forward so much as sideways, so I would advise perhaps little breaks with present content; such things as -where is Felicity's head at?What does Diggle think about her taking off? Is there a conversation between Oliver and Sara, or Oliver and Diggle, where is Olivers head at? What did Sara make of Felicity and what Oliver told her about not being with someone he could care about. These are all things that would tie your fic back to the present.

I hope you take that all constructively, because I think that your writing is really solid, and I cant wait to see where you are taking this, just remember the big picture and don't get too mired in the details, find the balance. I think that perhaps you need to write down your beginning, your ending and roughly map out your ideas for the body, look at what is moving the story closer to your ending and what is a tangent or off shoot of the story. I personally love detail orientated fics, and you do that really well, but it feels like you are focusing on it so closely that you perhaps need to take a step back and focus on the big picture again?

Don't switch to the first person in the middle of a chapter that has been in the 3rd. Stick to a consistent POV. The last two chapters are veering far from your original story. All the background stuff about Felicity before should've been told in one chapter. Your story is all over the place.

I'm not sure the season 5 flashback was so necessary.

Loving the background story but when do Team Arrow find out?

awesome update :)

Seriously need to have a story to tell before beginning. Four chapters in almost a year. I don't remember this story and will reread when it becomes clear it's going somewhere! I don't remember liking it, though.