I can't tell you how in love I am with your writing. I'm not usually one for first person either, but OMFG, do you do it well.
Hits me right in the feels!
Requesting an Asuna POV - please!

I love it! Oh my GOD! Beautifully written, the style is unique and well-thought out, and the depth of it... I actually felt like Kazuto for a bit... and I'm a GIRL! Bravo you brilliant writer! Bravo!

I'm not sure if you've written any other SAO fanfictions, but I really hope you have! This is an amazing story! It's so sweet and honest and I get teary eyed every time I read it.
Thank you for writing this amazing story and I look forward to anything you decide to write in the future.

That imagery though! Stiil job well done, and you even got the time period right where they first had sex the night when Kirito kills story, insanely discriptive(good thing, very good thing), and overall very well written.

This was absolutely beautiful. You captured both of the characters perfectly. I love your style. I look forward to reading more.

Beuatiful! God, it was beautiful, I loved it. Plz write more Asuna /Kirito! They are so cute!

That... Was beautiful. Incredible. Congratulations, you've truly gone to the heart and soul of the poetry within SAO.
I'm sorry I don't have much to say. Only well done, and thank you for writing this wonderful piece.

I love it. It made me cry :')

OH MY GOSH! I was listening to my playlist on my computer and while I'm in the middle of this A Thousand Years by Christina Perry comes on and it just sounded so RIGHT! Now to the whole review part. Amazing! I can honestly say that is the best story I have ever read on here! Beautifully written, I honestly think you captured Kitito's character perfectly. I look forward to reading more by you. Keep up the good work and keep writing like this and you will stay like, my favorite author!
XOXO!

This was perfect. Poetic, real, emotional, and beautiful. I loved the imagery, the wonderful wordplay, and your style was superb. Asuna and Kazuto were perfectly IC, honestly I can't think of anything that would make this ficlet better!

That was really really good. I don't what else you can say about it other than wow. That's all I can say, wow.

Very nice piece, beautifully written, and delves more into Kirito's feelings and development than the smut itself. I love stories like this, well done!