I think this is honestly a good story but i think that it should start a little slower between jaune and pyrrha ( i am looking forward to the next chapter)

Hey, it's a great story I hope you add more chapters believe it or not you have several fans out here in the military keep it up.

Very good

Thanks for writing this story! I like it so far!

Really entertaining. Most stories make me go on and off but I kept reading this. Please keep writing

keep it up

steamy you know we want steamy

Steamy.

I vote for steamy.

Plz more

I WANT THE FULL LEMON! This is so good i wanna see the full lemon next!

Full lemon

Trevor Washington, I see what you did there, you sly bastard ;)

Hmmm from what I can read there are three Easter eggs.

1. Freelancer Steakhouse: Freelancers from RvB

2. Trevor Washington: Agent Washington from RvB

3. Trevor and Ozpins relation: Wash and Ozpin share the same voice actor, Shannon McCormick.

All in all, nice work so far. Though in my opinion I think you're rushing Jaune and Pyrrha into the lovey dicey stuff (i.e. The pet names and sudden declarations of love and passion.) a bit. Granted they have admitted they love each other, they just started dating. From the way Miles, Karry, and Monty wrote Jaune I assume this would be his first girlfriend. So I'm thinking he would be extremely careful with this new relationship and all that encompasses it; especially since it's Pyrrha and I want to say even Jaune would admit that she's a bit out of his league.

Just my two cents. Keep up the good work.