Yes, Sarah..(wrings hands in anticipation), read it before it's too late!

Oh, and nice chapter.

"Compromise...one of the more annoying things about being human."

Couldn't agree more, your Majesty - err, Wizard
Brilliant story!

This is wonderful and I looking foward to read the next one!

It's "the power voo doo".

Aaaah so good! This was absolutely perfect, thank you! I'm glad I decided not to read it on the tram because I made a lot of ugly emotion faces.

I am loving this fanfic so much I had to go out and buy chocolate icecream to finish it

Never have I so throughly questioned Sarah's choice about rescuing him in the first place. It wouldn't surprise me if she really sends his ungrateful little butt to the Orphanage. Hopefully in the next installment he learns something. Wonder what would happen if he knew that Jareth tried exchanging his life for his? It would be ironic if he had to help Sarah rescue Jareth, or had a guilt trip & decided to rescue him.

Oh my gosh, this was EPIC! I loved every minute of it. Heck, I even read it while teasing the dog with a laser pointer (swear this thing is half cat). The storyline was brilliant and I absolutely loved how you portrayed Jareth and Sarah. Gosh, there were so many times I wanted to smack Jareth for completely missing the mark in courting Sarah. Glad he finally figured it out though, those two are just perfect together.

Either way, this was AWESOME! So favoring it! And a sequel?! I shall be searching for it this at once.

Loving this! Gonna read the next one! Ugh Toby why are you still here nobody likes you! Jeez he's lucky he didn't grow up with my parents! Best believe that I would've gotten my ass handed to me trying to do stuff like that!

Oh you little brat! YOU BELONG IN MILITARY SCHOOL! YOU DON'T EVEN CARE ABOUT YOUR SISTERS HAPPINESS. LITTLE PRICK!

Toby you little piece of crap!

Great story! Love your style!

Great job! You made Toby a real character; that's hard to find. I also love your writing style. It doesn't draw out scenes unessisarily.

Oh, dear, the little bugger. I want to swat his butt with a fly swatter, or a good old-fashioned paddle. He deserves it. This story has one really big thing going for it: it is very unique. It is not like anything else I have read. Looking so forward to the next installment. You've got a good thing here, keep it going.

About that name. DART! It ALWAYSSSSSSSSSS makes me giggle. It is right now. Did you intend it to be a laugh a minute every time he was mentioned? IT is hard to take a Goblin King named DART, seriously.

I think Dart loves his brother, and, in time will love Sarah as well. In a hundred years they can all have a good laugh about the ' good old days in the Aboveground ' .

This is a good story, not too long, well written, with characters the reader really cares about. I am glad there is now going to be a sequel, as I saw the new start on your site.

This just gets better and better with each chapter. One of the best reads I have had in a long time.