Reviews for Youngling
Guest chapter 11 . 8/13
Please continue this story. It’s a very interesting premise and very well-written. I’ve seen so many authors try the de-aged!character idea and fail miserably, but you have it spot on. This fic is powerful and poignant, and the characters are just OOC enough to make the circumstances believable (and, of course, the metric ton of fluff *sighs in happiness*). Please come back to this wonderful piece of writing, if only to give it some kind of closure.
Rex502 chapter 1 . 4/15
this is such a good story can you continue I cried I really wish this was the way revenge of the sith ended Cus anakin is one of my favourite characters and it broke my heart to see him fight obi wan my other favourite character I love this story so much I love it that much that I wish it was a real book
Guest chapter 8 . 2/11
Wow this is really good, I want too se what happens next though. I dunno, just thought of an idea of a sequel or something. Like, what if it ends up like the new hope, the jedi order being destroyed and everything, but instead of Luke and Lea(oops I forgot how to spell it ;-;), Anakin was raised again. I dunno though,you can use this stupid idea if you want but I just wanna see what's next.

Good story still :3
Guest chapter 3 . 1/19
*sarcastically* Anakin, a nightmare as a teen? Who would have thought?
Katla1 chapter 11 . 8/28/2019
Man! That was tense! Sidious is after Anakin this very moment!
Windu to the rescue! I LIKE it!

I'm sad to see this has been discontinued. As flawed as this story is, I sped through and didn't want to put it down. I don't regret reading it. If you ever decide to add to it, know I would be willing to read more.
Katla1 chapter 10 . 8/27/2019
When I read Dooku was dead I said "What?!" out loud!
Katla1 chapter 9 . 8/27/2019
Someone help Obi-Wan get some more sleep!

Hmmm... Sid- I mean Palpatine is giving off strange vibes.

The bounty hunters are arriving! And Anakin loses control of his powers yet again.

Yay! Rex is here!

Poor little Anakin.
Katla1 chapter 8 . 8/27/2019
PADME! YOU BLEW YOUR SECRET!

Whelp. A lot of stuff came out, didn't it?
Katla1 chapter 7 . 8/27/2019
Ooooh... that'll be awkward, Padme seeing that her husband is a toddler. Also, I'm sure things are OOC/overly fluffy, but do I care at this point? :P

Poor Anakin is destined to always suffer nightmares.
Nice to see Rex and the others. Wasn't expecting that.
Katla1 chapter 6 . 8/27/2019
I like the added depth of the Council discussing who should know about deaged!Anakin and how much they should keep secret.
Aw! Poor Anakin bumped his head.
Oof! Now Palpatine knows! This isn't good. Very well done scene, though.
Love. :3
Katla1 chapter 5 . 8/26/2019
Ok, I LOVE how this chapter starts! With the simplified version of what Master means to Anakin. It's very touching. And I love Obi-Wan rocking Anakin to sleep. What can I say? I'm such a sucker. :P
"How 'm I alive?!" I actually chuckled aloud! XD
omg! The part where Obi-Wan tells Anakin what his "job" is as his padawan is giving me the biggest fuzzies!

Ooh! Anakin is not happy and we get to see a /very/ stern Obi-Wan.
I very much like reading stern/angry-but-not-abusive Kenobi. :) Anakin deserves a scolding. I applaud Obi-Wan for being as patient as he was.
Ah. My lil bro used to bite, too. A lot.
Anakin calling himself stupid made me emotional. My lil bro does that, and we really hate hearing a little kid say that.
Anakin: "And I'll always care about you." Me: Thinks about Darth Vader and gets angsty.

As I thought I would, I'm enjoying this story. :)
Katla1 chapter 4 . 8/26/2019
Dang! My heart skipped a beat when Windu suggested separating them!
Love how the chapter ended. :)
Katla1 chapter 3 . 8/26/2019
((Forgot to mention in previous review that Anakin blowing up the droids is super cool!))
I would make Anakin behave less hysterically. (I refer to the screaming in the previous chapters.) Even as a boy he was very brave.
Anakin sticking his arm out dramatically! XD Love it!
That little "ew" after he finished eating is adorable! :3
Master and lil Padawan asleep beside each other. It's too cute!
I really, REALLY like how you write Yoda and Windu!
Aw! I was expecting Ani to fuss over a bath, but you make a great point: water on Tatooine was a privilege. Love it. :3
Oh... oh. Those scars... I feel ill.
I'm so stupid. Anakin's "It's okay. Don't be sad." Almost made me cry.

I'm not going to bother critiquing much from here on out, even though I always see plenty to correct(I'm just that way), unless you want me to in a PM. Regardless of flaws bound to be in any fanfiction, I think i'm going to really enjoy this one. :)
Katla1 chapter 2 . 8/26/2019
I'm not sure that's quite how little kids talk, but such things are hard to get right, and nothing cringey was said, so I'll let it pass.
I'll also let Obi-Wan's OOC kisses slide because the first one warmed my insides and fanfiction is allowed to take liberties.
The man entering the room was really eery! It made my stomach churn! Also loved how Obi-Wan forced-pushed him across the room with the desk!
Obi-Wan and Anakin are both really OOC.
But I still think I'm going to enjoy this. :P
Katla1 chapter 1 . 8/26/2019
This is nice! It kept me engaged, even though it's a bit wordy and has a few spelling mistakes. I'm going to assume that this takes place in the early stages of the clone wars, before Anakin has become a Jedi Knight?
I'm a sucker for this kind of stuff! :P A fantastic end to the chapter. Excited to read more!
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