Love it! Update?

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

It's a very interesting idea, this story.

OHHH I'm liking this~~*vigorously clicks next chapter*

It sounds really cool, I hope you find time to continue it :)

OH MY GOD! This is so cooool! I love the idea! Its the first type i've read!Its amazing! Please oh please, please, PLEASE continue this! Its too good to be left alone!

interesting

Please. Oh my gosh. Continue this. I'll die if you don't. It's just so great. Continue? c:

Are you going to be adding more chapters to this story? It's really an amazing story with loads of potential. Please add chapters!

SO GOOOOOOOD this story has so much potential! Pleeeeeaaaase pleasepleasepleaseplease continue because like I said, SO GOOD.

Ohhh I'm very curious now

What an interesting start! I like Jack convincing himself at the end to not be afraid. :D

Wonderful. I am waiting for new chapters.

I really like your writing a lot!
Pleasssss write more. ;)
Thx

A shame about your computer, I send out my empathy in a virtual hug *hugs*
Now, as for your story...this looks fantastic.
So far you've shown a wonderful grasp in the English language and the use of creating a story.
The concept is already intriguing, add to that the fact that you've created emotions and believable fiction in just one chapter, and you've got yourself another follower.
I really hope you can manage to update this sometime in the near future.
Fingers crossed for a happy writing and editing process.