Reviews for The End of the Line
Anne chapter 5 . 8/18
May I just break into tears at how beautiful this fic series has been? I didn't appreciate John as much until discovering this series. I love the bond that John and Seth (Sam haha) have. As hunters in the show, I always felt like there was that power struggle between Sam and John's stubbornness. John: the father figure. Sam: the rebellious son. Here the two are closer to equals. It's such a fun dynamic because John was such a lone wolf on the show.

It's funny that I was just now watching the Supernatural episodes following John's passing and Sam's newfound determination to continue in his Dad's footsteps. Kind of makes me watch their interactions in the show with a different view and dynamic.

Thank you for your writing. This was the perfect ending and will always be one of my favorites.

Cheers Fia!
Readeverything chapter 1 . 5/11
This is such a great series! I wish you’d continue it... it would be interesting to see the relationship dynamics with Sammy the only one who really knows who Seth is.. would also like to know what happened in the other timeline.. Regardless, it was a fun read. Thank you!
Rain of the Forest chapter 5 . 4/14/2019
Oh how I wish there were more stories after this! If only to see how Seth would work with his new family as the 'uncle' of the Winchester boys! Not to mention some more protective!John Winchester!
Noxvae chapter 5 . 1/14/2019
I just so loved this story ! Is there a next ?
AmaraRae chapter 5 . 9/9/2018
So wait. I am so very confused here. Is Seth, Sammy? or is Seth John's Brother that I've never even heard of? My brain hurts.
Dazzle2002 chapter 5 . 1/23/2018
Are you gonna add another part?
Angelees6782 chapter 5 . 1/18/2018
Me encantó
DarkArcher76 chapter 5 . 1/2/2018
Love this series! I love who John thinks 'Seth' is, and I have to admit that that's the most logical assumption. Now that hell's shut down, I wonder what comes next. I would love to read a continuation fic about them all dealing with heaven. Whom I imagine is shitting bricks now that hells locked up, their big plan is now de railed. I imagine heaven's gonna be trying something to get it back on the rails, so another fic about them all dealing with heaven and the angels would be great.

Anyway, love these stories. They were really well written. I also liked how they were from John's point of view, which was really interesting to read.
Ak47 chapter 5 . 12/27/2017
NO THIS CANNOT END HERE THE HELL I GOT LEGITIMATELY CONFUSED CAUSE JOHN THOUGHT SETH WAS HIS BROTHER... SETH IS SAM, RIGHT? SAM FROM THE S8 ERA? IM 99% SURE SETH IS SAM, THAT 1% IS CAUSE JOHN THINKS ITS HIS BROTHER, BUT JOHN DOESNT HAVE A BROTHER IN THIS FIC, RIHHT? I KNOW SETH IS SAM!
DarkArcher76 chapter 5 . 12/14/2017
So, you wrote “Harry winchester.” It’s actually Henry, not harry. As Sam found out about the demon blood when he was 23, not when he was 22.
Athena's phoenix chapter 5 . 8/29/2017
Okay, that ending is adorable. This whole series is magnificent. :)
sunshine102897 chapter 4 . 12/24/2016
AAAAGGGHHH NOW I REMEMBER HOW THIS ENDED. SAMMY KNOWS WHO SETH HIS. BUT JOHN. AAAAGGGHHH HE NEEDS TO WORK ON PICKING UP DROPPED HINTS. Still an amazing story though I wish there was more. I could read on forever!
Miss Lucky Ducky chapter 5 . 12/20/2016
I really love this. I don't know whether this is the end of the series, but either way, it was a great read. Great grammar, plot, and characterization. If you continue, I would love to know more about Seth/Sam's back story. What season did he come from? What was that scar? Where are Dean and Cas? Anyway, thanks for putting all the effort you did.
Neristhaed chapter 5 . 11/14/2016
Good god I wish I had found these stories sooner. This is just so awesome and the ending was perfect. Because I can just see this happening, John starts saying things and Seth sees that John came to the completely wrong if logical conclusion. John is very uncharacteristically rambling and this time Sammy is the one that interrupts after eavesdropping before Seth can correct John telling him that someone wanted to speak to him. Then John leaves telling Seth to think about it while he goes to deal with whoever and because Seth is Sam is Sammy and he has always been just a bit too smart no matter his age and Sammy makes his argument for why Seth shouldn't correct John and uses Seth's own argument on the importance of little brothers which in turn makes Seth thoughtful. Thus Seth becomes Uncle Seth and because John is a goddamned blood hound with a scent he might even find a way to save Seth without royally fucking up the world or if not at least Seth won't die alone and he would have his family back.
Starshinesoldier chapter 5 . 11/10/2016
Oh I love this! John thinks Sam/Seth is his half brother! XD But Sammy know the truth about Seth. Must be a little weird for him.
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