well written and hugely entertaining

lol i don't know what's wrong with me a couple of days ago i read half of this and was like nah don't like it so i dropped it and then literally I just finished it and was like
this is heccing amazing

Continue and update please soon .make She find Truth about shukaku and Seal used is Near quality regular weapons scroll and start learn fuinjutsu maybe She find toad save jiraya and after She give him copy Seal used on gaara Road sage help her and fix his seal (gaara uncle and father become suprised when see gaara practicaly turn into regular child )his uncle become suprised from gaara grow weak red more.

please update this book and not abandon it, I love OC x shika ezpecially with gaara involved!

YES YES YES YES. THANK YOU. I LOVE YOU. This has been one of my favorite fanfics for forever, which says a lot when I've legitimately read 400 stories already. I just love Elder Sister so much, I love the plot of it, the idea of a less than morally right protagonist, and your writing. Thank you for blessing us with this update.

Got to chapter 7 and it was interesting so far.

I have come to like this original character Lotte/Mikasa. But sometimes I think she should at least pretend to act her age to avoid suspicion. Does she not realize she is behaving like a rude adult in a child's body? And does she not realize or didn't read or watch about Naruto, and that she is in the Naruto universe?

About her and waru. I hope you don't ship those two together. And also hope you don't plan on putting Mikasa in the same team as waru. I hate him just like Lotte does, and don't want to see them together. If you do put them together in the same team then I will just stop reading this story. I can't tolerate to that psycho. And I also don't like to see Mikasa get beat up by waru. At least make it so that they are equal in power. If waru can adapt to avoiding her attacks then so can Lotte avoid all his tricks.

When it comes for family matters, I would like to see Mikasa become a beloved elder sister to all her siblings. Forging deep bonds with Gaara, Temari and Kankuro. I see she has started with Kankuro in chapter 7 and that's great. Hope to see fluffy family affections in future chapters!

I am curious about Waru and why he is the way he is.
Write when can, its good

Please update?

Love ur story
I hope you'll update one day

I ship Lottie and Waru too but you put her and Shikamaru together which I don't agree with because doesn't he and Temari get together.

Waru and Mikasa are perfect for each other two physcopaths in a pod

I quite like the idea of psychopathic (although he reminds me more of a sociopath) Gaara with a soft spot for his older sister.

waru is dark asf' but something tells me that's how he shows his "love"

Wasn't "Sabaku" a part of Gaara's exclusive title though? From what I recall, they don't exactly have surnames.

And it wasn't just Sabaku, it was Sabaku no Gaara. (Gaara of the Sand) Because like I said, title. *shrugs*

I'd love to see her and shikamarus interactions with each other