Beat my I love it so very much

Sweet. Brilliant idea, I love Soubi and Ritsuka. Terrific job (Come To Me) was very well written and well thoughtout.

Why isn't this a story?

Loved it! You kept them all in character. Well done!

This was such an amazing read! I felt so emotional throughout, and the ending didn't change that. I loved it! Very well written by the way.

I finally pushed my laziness to the side in order to review this fic. It is one of best Loveless fics that I have come across. I love how you incorporated almost every character that is part of Ritsuka's life, from his therapist to his best friends; the focus is on our two protagonists, as it should for this fic, but I really feel that having all these characters mentioned helped make the fic more well-rounded. I also appreciated the references to previous Loveless volumes (the piercing, the tattoo, Soubi's phrasing when asking for the name to be on his chest-at least this part seemed to follow his syntax when talking to Ritsuka during the battle with Nisei, etc.). All of the references to the past nicely highlighted Soubi and Ritsuka's slow growth. I liked how even though Ritsuka and Soubi are both taking a huge step in their relationship there are still some lingering problems that don't just go away. It gave it a realistic tone. The meaning Soubi gave to Loveless was really nice as well as his deference to Ritsuka, especially during the test battle with the Zeros (who, along with Kio, were a great addition to the fic). Anyway... I'm kind of extremely tired and need to get some sleep, so if my review isn't completely fleshed out forgive me.

Please say you'll write more for this story! I at least want to know how the meeting with Ritsu goes! :D

I loved this!

Such a great story :D I wish it was canon so Soubi and Ritsuka could finally have their happy ending! I hope to hear more from you because I think you are a talented writer!

it is the way i want it to end up!-someone once siad in a story that the zero boys were the only ones who ever told ristuka anything useful about soubi's world & they never lied to him even when everyone else did

Awww, that was wonderful! Loved it! :) Ritsuka finally gets it and did a great job getting Soubi back. Hugs to you!