Several times, this made me laugh so loudly and suddenly, I jump-scared my sister.

Your rhyming skills for bee are flipping amazing!

sorry i read both of the Naruto runaway chronicles and i was hoping to see more romance bit its more of a drama than anything else.

Type your review if you read this just kill yourself writer u cost me a lot of money for reading this time is money useles

Well I was enjoying the story until you start talking about true clones and how he got hisemory supressed and how Minato and kushina is alive. This story turn to shit.

Holy shit, that's one massive fuck up XD This is a great plot twist! Also enjoyed your OC idea! Sounds like an awesome person! (I figure that I shouldn't put spoilers in the comments. Might be too paranoid...)
Awesome story! Thanks for writing!

Really? Minato and kushina are alive had a family and Naruto was born from clones, every thing else I can understand but this nope. Sadly this story started soo well and now it went into bullshit territory.

This is seriously confusing. On one hand, I think Naruto is an annoying moron for not realising that something doesn't adds up with his memories. On the other hand, I want him to live happily ever after with Nayumi. There is only one solution left. Fuck you, Kurama.

So been there it's why I haven't written anything in over 5 years it's hard to start back up knowing how shity you were and it puts a mental block and zaps away you're confidence doesn't help one of my spring bords is a egotistical dick who likes to s*** on every story concept I come up with. ... Sorry didn't mean to rant point is I'm still trying to write my first story back it's a major thing nothing ever feals good enough it's harsh I started my reboot 3 years ago deleted my old work saved planned to rewrite it not exactly a option now seeing how I don't have access to the originals anymore point is I've been there still there sadly maybe by the time I review chapter 4 of the rewrite I'll have that glorious blue 1 next to my username again. I'm not going to lie I'm a extremely crappy writer I have next no clue about it for reasons but plot and concepts are my stronger point and I get your flaws on this I really do but this had a lot of strong points I hope carry over.

Pain seems fitting for him if not humility but pain is were id go with it.

I'm running out of chapters at a alarming rate I will start the new version of this after I finish this one but I do hope you return to this one some day I'm gonna guess you changed some things and I have to admit this version is magical in a strange way I'd like to think of this as a alternative version rather than the original version.

Yes to the Sharingan (Ami's to be precise I'd figure Itachi would have his sister's eyes in case naruto ever learned the truth and Ami would want naruto to have her eyes) and yes to the triad as a heram is 3 or more females (or males for a reverse heram) to one man I looked up the details of herams and groups the smallest a group can be is 3 and heram is is defined as a group interested in sharing the same suiter. So technically two partners by definition has no name so triad is what I'll go with. I'm rooting for Kurotsuchi she seems fitting for this kind of storyline.

Fist gale style is water and lightning wind and lightning are swift release according to the sepoused official Naruto Elemental Affinity wheel second the faoxs nature alignment is wind and fire I suspect he has Scorch release. Third I recommend lightning just for the fact he's in the lighting Nation but I'd actually like to see naruto have natural Scorch and Swift release and artificial ice and gale style do to experimenting also it's kind of implied in the Naruto data that anyone could train any element for any. Of time to learn to use that so Naruto could have learned fire affinity just saying especially when you factor in the shadow clone training speeding up the process even if it's is flawed element He could still technically Master it with it with the help of the fox.

Man that's going to be interesting snow, waterfall sand, and quite a few other Villages including the wave are loyal to naruto not the leaf raikage literally took the the queen where are you where he was expecting to take a bishop or a knight leaf is fuuuukkkkkked seriously the stone hates them and the fact they tortured the son of the man who slughtered them to the point of failure in such a way will not sit well with them his father may of been hated but what the leaf did to the son of they're hero the man they hate who if his son looks bad reflects badly on them well prides a bitch zabuza one of the strongest generation of 7 swords men respected naruto so the mist if it has spies will probably see the leaf in a bad light gaara sees naruto as a brother so I'd the leaf gose after him gaara will side with the lightning litterly the only hope 4 Hour wise Leaf has is to sell Sasuke to Orochimaru. How sad.

at that moment the leaf knew... it fucked up.