Ohhh Jack! The moment you think you can get any girl is the moment you are toast! Burnt toast!

Ahhhhh! Update please! I loved this! EEEEEK! It's SO cute, and awesome! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D! Continue please! I love how they are both so hesitant to admit their feelings, and that they still give into it a little sometimes. And how Anna notices... so Anna. And so cute! I love it to pieces! I would sincerely die if this was dis-continued! *gives you the puss in boots look* Please update soon. :D
Annanarra

Poor jack

awesome story! I loved it! please update soon...

Ohhh, i saw how you used the name "Kai" in the story, its from the original fairytale the movie Frozen was based on isn't it? :D I wonder if i'm the only one who noticed that...

I noticed you made North say: "let the young lass tag along" Well, i know this isn't very important to the story, just something i wanted to point out but...North is Russian, its the Irish or Scottish (not sure) who address girls as lass.

Please do not stop writing! It is an awesome story

amazing chapter please update soon ! :-)

Great so far please update soon! I can't whait to see what happens!

This is fantastic! You write beautifully! And the story is pretty interesting too! :)

Ohh my word I looove this story I couldn't stop reading ! I always thought jack should have a girlfriend,and who better to fufill that role than Elsa ! I love their "moments" they are soo adorable ! And the fact that you bring Pitch back is amazing ,along with the devastation of his newly found power !leaves you on the edge of your seat ...PLEASE WRITE MORE !I'm dying to know what happens

They are sooo freaking adorable! Please update soon. They soooo cute!

I love this story! It's so cute Elsa and jack moments how they're so awkward but so cute together and facing danger together... LOOOVE! Now granted Elsa's powers are still not under control completely so my guess is Pitch is going to play off of black ice this time through Elsa. But it gets to me that Jack still hasn't seen her ice palace! He'd love it! Talk about impressive! Write fast!

The mermaid of zennor... Matthew Trewella... Is that an Ingo reference I see?

Don't make the people of Arendelle die just put them in a deep sleep where they can't wake up and have nightmares unless pitch wakes them up. Also don't make Elsa cold she can't feel the cold. But the rest of the story is ravishing. Please try to make those changes.