AWESOME! I LIKE YOUR WRITING STYLE!

i like this. it was very good. i like how in the end they just understood each other.

very good story. amazing really. and i'm glad you ended it there, some authors don't understand the concept of ENDING a story ... but you did it magnificently.

Ooh, loved the ending! Very mysterious. Good job on the fic all together, and congratulations!

weird, dark at first, but it's good

whos the he?

*smile* So you know that I'm a Literati supporter and,obviously that's where I'd like this to go. But I think I read somewhere you switched to being a Trory fan so...:-) Anyway, I really like the idea of Rory questioning herself, her life. The story's quite well written. I'm looking forward to more. And the Dante quote: splendid touch!

That was amazing. It really was. It really touched me, and made me think :) Does that mean that this is the end? :( If it is, I'll be looking forward to your others stories! :)

Oh my god... this is really SAD! I want to cry. Why does she never talk to Jess again? Very sad. Very sad. Pretty good, though. Actually, Very good, though.

CONTINUE!

If this fic is going to end up a Trory, it should come with a warning label so I don't mistakingly read it again. Make it a Literati!

This is a great story. As a R/J fan its my duty to ask for a R/J fic. I think Jess should be on the bridge because its "thier spot".

great story! please continue asap! it was very mean to leave it like that!

I hope you continue with this story. I'm not sure where it's heading but its definitely an interesting and new bent. Keep writing. :-)

Jennifer

Hey, Good twist in that conversation. I realy like your writing skils. Your an amazing writer. As a Trory fan Its my dutie to ask for a Trory fic. So please consider it. Write more soon!