what will harry do now that he the plans the headmaster will do to him.

This makes no sense.

Well i enjoyed the back story on the items but feel i was too much info personally ..

Also tonks is acting like a tool, shes just dumbledores faithful minion now and its pathetic.. and i get the impression she simply looks down on harry due to his age.. She obviously needs to be set straight during their next meeting or else ship off and forget about james evans.. Oh right your bonded, good luck with that ..

Im not sure what the point of the poll is if you already have mentioned that harry was bonded to gabrielle and fleur in a previous chapter as well as mention of the metamorphasis bond with nym .. Then we have the marriage contracts so really its pretty much been established thatt this will be harry/nym/fleur/gabby/blaise/daphne/tracey ..

Susan is high on the poll but meh she hasnt been mentioned at all so could be added or omitted easily ..

I would just really like to see harry with the above girls mentioned because of the previous chapters info on them/ their interactions, regardless of the poll results which lean towards this regardless

Anyways keep it up! But less focus on unimportant things like this.. More interested in plot and character interactions personally .. But suppose this had to start somewhere..

I love this story so much!

damm i like the weapons cant wait for to see them in action

hmm alright well thanks for addressing my review but you really didn't have to put it in an A/N.. although some other people might have similar questions if they hadn't read 'HP and the book'..

I'll head over and take a look but why not include parts of that in this regardless ? it would make this story much more cohesive in ideas and such? maybe a flashback and reflection here or there could incorporate some of the plot you want to impart on this story ..

This is more of a personal opinion but the first person POV is hard to read for harry.. I suppose im just used to it from JK's books, most other books, and the majority of well written fanfictions.. This perspective just makes it seem a bit unpolished and kind of amateur? Just something to consider is all.. It may be easier to write this way but it sure isn't to read..

I'll send you a message after I read your first fic for the backstory

good chapter as usual looking forward the next chapters

woohoo nymphie and fleur are in the lead D

Awesome chapter.

this story has a nice concept but the writing isn't very cohesive or flowing naturally..

Im very confused as to why the greengrass's looked after harry up until age 9 and then harry was sent to the dursleys ?

I guess mrs. greengrass was one of the named caretakers for harry in the potters will and once she died dumbledore went after him to gain control..

I can understand how daphne may react like that.. likely feeling betrayed herself that harry would now be in the grips of people like hermione/ron/ginny and dumbledore.. not to mention the whole slytherin vs. gryffindor rivalry..

such a shame .. i have no idea where this story is going to lead to when school starts back up..

I can assume that harry goes to gringotts to see the marriage contract/estate overview and the transactions of dumbledore/molly stealing from him..

he better get those bastards out of his godfathers house and grow a pair ..

Im wondering what the deal with blaise is as well as how all these people haven't stayed in contact with harry throughout school..

maybe some perspectives /reflection from them would be nice to fill in the gaps of 1st to 5th year..

will definitely be hard to get daphne/tracey/blaise to all be with harry.. especially considering the house rivalry and that the death eater children will be looking to get these girls for themselves.. the only other person i could see would be susan bones .. atleast that wouldnt be too forced

okay. Chapter two seems to have no real connection to chapter one. And I really think you have enough to be getting on about without adding in random stuff. You really needed to have some continuity with the first few chapters. If you read the two chapters without knowing they were supposed to be part of the same story, you would never guess that they were part of the same story. I'm going back to the original and try to figure out what you just tried to do. You had a real strong first chapter. Then...

hmm looks good and better then the first version looking forward the next chapters

Fail

Awesome chapter.

Hmm, I can't say for sure how I feel about it yet. I felt like the relationship development occurred faster in the book.