I am so happy you updated!1 But I wish you would update again!please I love this story so much!

Great chapter! I desperately want Sarah and Jareth to end up together, I hope they find a way to work it out. I can't wait to read more!

This is genuinely so great and I love reading it. This chapter has to be my favorite so far-it keeps getting better. Awesome job!

Please please please update! I want to read the next chapter!

Omg. Awesome! I can't wait to read more!

Update! Update NOW! UGGH! How dare you leave it like that! I am so sad! but great story so far! :D

Love the story so far. So can't wait for the next chapter. An very well written and funny and cute 2.

Interesting dynamic. Looking forward to more.

great update! xE

I'm kinda wondering if Jareth is magically compelled somehow, or if he just has a subby personality. Or some third option. Either way, into this.

I don't know who this Peter is but I don't like him either. I am rooting for my favorite Goblin King and ohhh it would be super super dreamy if you updated like tomorrow so we can find out what happens the next year after of course Sarah sensibly breaks up with Peter who never deserved her to begin with.

I hope you are continuing with this story it has such a good premise and so much delightful possibility between these two. I think you have a perfect Jareth and a Sarah who is figuring it all out. I am really looking forward to seeing where this will go.

So good! Update soon?

write more soon

Phew!*fans self* that's some chemistry. Wow ;) Great job x