I just watched the movie, and it felt a little incomplete, like I wasn't ready for it to end. This. This was the perfect ending. Thank-you.

This story is really good Im happy that you shared Jon point of view of everything that had happened to him. And explained what the true meaning of sex is great work excellent.

I really liked this. You did a great job, sticking true to Jon's voice but still showing the growth he's made at the end of the movie. You put my feelings about their relationship into words; she's helping him grow up and he's helping her to move on. The last paragraph really says it all, and I love that. Love the fact that he recognizes that Esther will always have a lasting imprint on him and he her. Great job and once again spot on characterization!

Awesome job. I heard it in Jon's voice. I think this was a great kind of character analysis. A few typoes/forgotten words here and there, but that can be cleaned up easily. :D