This story accurately portrayed how people deal with the loss of a loved one. They refuse to give up hope, no matter what. And if it all gets too much, well lets just say I don't blame Ruby for what she did. You really should write a sequeo, and show how Amber deals with it.
All in all, a really good story. I loved it!

Very good story although it couldve used some more romance between ruby and alec

Wtf...Sorry but this was severely rushed and cringy. It had been so good until these last two chapters.

Bella is so OOC... This is so awkward. It's like you write her badly just because you hate her...

How can someone let herself be bullied like that? It's really pathetic and it makes me angry... Even if someone would hit me I would hit them back. I can't believe that even the teachers are afraid of those bullies. It doesn't make sense, but in America I shouldn't be very surprised, but I still am.

I am sorry, but I can't seem to understand this. How can the parents not trust the child? How can they forget the death of a loved one so easily and not try their best to find out what happened? It just doesn't make sense. The fact that the number never existed and telling their daughter that she just wanted attention. Would someone really lie about something so important? Their behaviour is not normal.

Would u ever finish this? Please do

I truly enjoyed reading this fanfic. It wasn't rushed and its dark twists and turns were amazing. Your writing was very mature, and I rarely shed a tear for the fanfics I read, this one though, made me cry. It filled me with sadness and sorrow, and I was really pleased with it. It was because your story was well thought, the characters were realistic, their actions and thoughts are more realistic than fictional, the story was written so well and it truly is a masterpiece. Thank you.

i love this story it is one of the very few that don't constitutionally have authors notes throughout and i love the creative story line xx

I wish I never read this... I'm so sad now

Amber was such a bitch in this chapter...

I could not understand how it is possible that such a young girl enjoy my dark story. Now I know. Your story is a real drama. Your writing is incredible, very mature. You are very good in conveying their emotions. I cried in the end. I empathize with Ruby and I can understand her misery, her inner struggles. She is a great character. I love how you describe places. I could imagine the surroundings as if I was there. Your description of the Volturi is very very real. The finish was heartbreaking but, surprisingly, I like that Aro had their parents killed. I love his dark, devil like character. It is just him and the life among the Volturi. Your epilogue is a masterpiece. I hope you win the contest. :-)))

Hello lovely :) I just read through your story, and it's one of the better ones that I've read, especially for the Volturi. Congrats on a great story! Good luck to you in the BV Awards :D

Her sister's a complete and utter bitch.

So apart from the fact the last two chapters were emotionally devastating, I felt like everything lead to the epilogue. Some lovely parallels threaded right through the story.

Some of the characters felt a little more glossed over than others, though Amber and Ruby were brilliant. Shouldn't Aro know better than to order the deaths of the girls' parents right in their faces? It doesn't take a master tactician to know that isn't the best plan. And Alec didn't quite get to be a character in his own right.

But yeah. I need to have a cup of tea and lie down. That was mind-blowing. Thank you! xx