Reviews for Broken Promises
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 25 . 10/26/2018
Are you on AO3?
Guest chapter 28 . 7/18/2018
I love this but I was hoping for a bit more; Beca has the babies and a house with Chloe, Jesse pops in all the time to see them, Beca is back in college and a Bella again. I don’t really know but definitely want to see how Beca handles motherhood and what she would name the babies (maybe Bella or Harmony?)
SharonE chapter 28 . 7/13/2018
really, this is the end? I was hoping that Becca gave birth to the 2 and that she and Chloe could buy a house together.
Allison chapter 28 . 7/8/2018
Can you please write, after beca has the babies. Like newborn then toddler, 5 year old, struggles and fun events throughout her, Chloe, Jesse and the twins (I think their boys) lives
jadethetroll chapter 28 . 7/9/2018
awww
50 Shades of Pitch Perfect chapter 28 . 7/8/2018
Great ending. Things being out in the open gives more time for it to work out in the end. Loved this story

Maybe consider an epilogue?
50 Shades of Pitch Perfect chapter 27 . 7/8/2018
I feel bad for Chloe. She's hurting :(

Great conversation between Beca and Jesse. So much has changed. I'm glad they can remain friends. I like how Jesse is pulling for Beca to be with Chloe. It's good that Jesse knows Beca is pregnant.

Can't wait to see how things will work out.
Sobe29 chapter 28 . 7/8/2018
What a wonderful conclusion to this story! I like how there was a moment when we all wondered if Beca would go back with Jesse. Thank goodness for Chloe’s patience and Beca willing to be open to figuring out why Chloe was acting weird. Bechloe!
horsegurl03 chapter 28 . 7/8/2018
I think you should do a sequel. I'd like to see more of the relationships and how it goes with the babies.
ikrebs990 chapter 28 . 7/8/2018
thank you for finishing this. love how this ends and looking forward to the new fan fiction you are planning on writing. are you planning on finishing sleepwalkers and also what pairing is it? hope you update the new fan fiction regularly and again thank you soo much for giving this a real ending.
Duh2042 chapter 28 . 7/8/2018
Can we get an epilogue?!
Guest chapter 27 . 7/5/2018
I really liked this chapter! Great dialog between Beca and Jesse!
HappyReader chapter 27 . 7/5/2018
That was really pleasant. I can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Chloe she must really be hurting. It is such a crazy situation but damn it makes for a great story.
Guest chapter 27 . 7/5/2018
Please don't rush the ending if you need time to do it properly. This story is really awesome
Guest chapter 26 . 7/5/2018
Please publish something one day. You really can tell a story.
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