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Guau

I literally read this in everyone's voice and it was such a great thing lol. Sorry you're not writing anymore Yuri but I enjoyed this very much!

YES. THIS FIC IS GOOD.
honestly Idk where to start? This is so good I feel like yelling about it! I almost can't believe it's your first time writing yuri smut, there's definitely things that can be improved but its amazing for a first time!
I love so many of the little moments too! Like Kakashi teasing his student in a porn store, anko giving recommendations, tsunade walking in, tsunade thinking about her assistant!
There's so much that's good!
wahhh sorry I wrote so much, I hope you can write more! I'd look forward to it!

Oh my god this was so hot I now want to be dominated so roughly. Sakura could make me squeal

Oh man! Dat was real smut! My pussy waz throbin with wet juices and i cldnt help bt with sm1 wld hump a dick in it

I also just want to add that I sincerely hope you continue writing yuri, best of luck.

This is definitely the best lemon I've read in a long while. Other authors are very awkward when writing sex scenes, you just make it flow very nicely. Other than a few typos, you did very well, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

greatness

AMAZING! Do more!

Goodness, I love this story. Not only because it, well, tickles my fancy, but the wording is just so beautiful. I love your vocabulary and the plot development. I have a hard time believing this is your first one! Keep up the good work!

...wow...

Sakura took initiative! Good for her!

As a lesbian I just want to say,
THIS IS SO FREAKING FLIPPING PANCAKES SUPER UBER DUPER AMAZINNNNNGGGGGG! GIRL! YOU ARE A YURI GODDESS! I SERIOSULY JUST DIED. * dies of blood loss*. tell my dog... * cough* * cough* that I love him. *

Ur first!? R u frikin kiddin me!? Tht was awesome dude! It may be hard but it was good. I pray u make another one! Plz!