I loved this. Man I love your Jasper. Strong, confident, dangerous. Nothing like Meyer’s ridiculous weakling. Man I hated what she did to Jasper. And what the movies did to Emmett by turning him into nothing more than a big dumb jock.

Carlisle is a hypocrite. As if he wouldn’t leave behind a mess if it meant protecting his precious Edward, or if Bella had been his mate instead. Asshole.

So Eddie and Alice are mates and she was too worried about herself to tell Jasper? Well, at least he wasn’t lonely all that time. Lol. Smart little Bella.

Oooooo, I’m in love already. Damn Jasper and all his sexiness. Also. Alice is disgusting. Sitting there pretending to be with one while clearly with the other. What does she have planned for Jasper that she’s tugging him along when he clearly isn’t hers to tug?

Sigh... I love how you hate Alice in many of your meg.

I love this story

Love it and wanted more!

Great start but wishing for more of this story.

loved it do wish abit longer but perfect as is too

Short, simple, no real drama... ... ... I LOVE IT! :D

Love it! :)

Reread and again thoroughly enjoyed your strong Jasper story. It's a beauty! Thanks again for sharing. :-)

Interesting

I'm honestly so obsessed with you and this story like it was amazing i fcking love you

That was amazing from start to finish. Not a single word wasted, everything just as it should be.