Hello,I’m a Chinese fan of this work and I really enjoy reading your story. I wonder whether I could get your permission to translate your story into Chinese to let more fans see it. If I get the permission, the website address and your name will be attached.

You've got to be fucking kidding me I HATE YOU

Please, fucking PLEASE have her lower body (you know what I mean) be healed by Steve

Fight to WHAT?!

Such a great stiry!

I sometimes think that Tony is the annoying child while Steve and Natasha acts like the parents. XD

Love it so far,

Hey this story is good so far! sorry to hear about depression. that sucks. I was thinking maybe you could put in a intimate scene? that would make their relationship seem better. great job so far!

I love this story. Please continue

Great story! It would be really nice if you wrote another sequel!

Id say, this is the greatest story ever read by anyone...just too many bad moments and very actions in it. But great ending. Btw, could u pls make a story continuing after this with their lives with kids. Just nothin where they leave, divorce, die or any such pls. Ty again for great story. And in next, include the others and their families and them getting together pls. GREAT STORY. WONDERFUL ENDING.

In the ending, I think instead of my love, just 'love' makes it more natural. Just an opinion anyway. Btw love the story so far :)

This z really awesome,the way u formed the story it's appreciated.I really enjoyed each ND every moments while reading it,I would request you to kindly share the next sequel of this storyline

I love it it's such a good story and a good couple please make more of these about this couple their my otp
Thank you for this
Steve and Natasha ALL THE WAY

Get a different proofreader.