I personally think your writing is incredible. When I read the words on the page it's difficult not to imagine them immediately and put myself in this world you've created. Not once am I ripped from this world by a badly constructed sentence or mistake and this to me proves how amazing a writer you are. I'm still she'll fucking shocked on how this story turned out... I mean... Completely shook. Damn I'm kinda upset that zoro never existed but I'm also loving this more than I thought I would. Well done on a well written book. Keep going!

I'm pretty sure I just had a heart attack an died

... Actually it's supposed to review chapter 18...hehe sorry my head is on backwards lately. Scary chapter number 18. I really am scared for sanji and for zoro. Gosh I hope you finish this story someday. Will be so sad if I can only continue reading this story in another 5 years or so

Sorry I realized my review reviews chapter 1, it's actually supposed to review chapter 21

I know there are 22 chapters but I'm reviewing on this one because I'm honestly scared to move on without know the the story ends. Being left on a cliffhanger when the story is becoming this sad and heart wrenching scares the shit outta me. Please please please keep writing. It's amazing but also amazingly heart breaking. I really hope this story ends well, and also just ends eventually cause cliff hangers suck dick. I say this but I'll probably lose my resolve and keep reading tomorrow anyways, even if it kills me a little inside.

This is so freaking sad and I love the plot twist in the story. This story had me crying man. Great work so far and i hope you will update on the next chapter soon :)

This is honestly the best fanfiction I've ever read. All the twists and turns left me on the edge of my seat the whole time I was reading. You are an amazingly talented writer and I hope that you can continue to express your creativity for the world to see. All of the best luck to you.

Words can't even discribe how much this story has broke me. This is honestly the most well written story I have ever read and that in itself is an understatement. It's so well written and the plot twist at the end was the most confusing yet awesome thing I have ever seen done. I love how it was so unpredictable.
Originally I usually read the comments to get a gist of the story sometimes, and I though I spoiled the story for myself when I read them. However, throughout reading it I though that what I read about zoro was wrong because he was constantly there and it must have been a misunderstanding. That couldn't have even prepared me for the truth... Damnnn... Jaodnevaosns yeah I'm not sure what else to say apart from this is honestly amazing and if anyone else is reading the comments before reading the story, you have to read it!

What a fanfic, my knees were week from the angst and drama. Thank you for this.

Hello love :)

I adore your fic so far. I don't know if you still work on this one, but it seems there is some unconstistancy with Zoro's age there. First chapter he was 5 years older then Sanji, later on, he mentioned being 27, and this chapter Sanji describe him being 28. Haha, Zoro seems to age veeery fast in a month ~

This all said I'll go back to reading your amazing work of yours and be ready to get a proper review from me once I reach the later chapters.

Best of best :3
Lou-chan

Bahahaha, good one :D the first creepy story that doesn't give me nightmares. Though now that i've been fooled once, i wonder if u'll turn it around again... i'm thinking about the mentioning of hypnotism on the kink list ;) ah ah ah, naughty :D
Looking forward to tbe next chapter, and thank you for all your works

Sanji can go down on himself, that was my first thought when Zoro said no hands. The jewish nose comment was xenophobic. Other than that really enjoying the fic so far :)

...ummm...holy shit! I was just looking for the kinky shit and um... Let's just say im re-reading this again.

This story was beautiful. It was written wonderfully, and just because it wasn't the ending some of your readers wanted doesn't mean it wasn't a great ending. I didn't expect that twist at the end, but it made your story all the more better. Personally, the ending that everyone was expecting (the happily ever after so to speak) would not fit this fic at all, and so the ending you wrote was fitting. I think you should go with your heart on this one and stick to the ending you have. If you really wanted to you could make an alternate ending for all those people who think a story with a perfect ending is the only kind of story, but I don't think it would be satisfying at all. Overall, I would like to let you know that I wasn't disappointed at all, rather the whole story was even better then I could've imagined. I sincerely hope you keep writing, and I'll be looking forward to your next story.

Great work. Didn't see that twist coming, keep it up!