This was a really fun story! I really enjoyed the two interacting. Nice job.

You should write more. Maybe include a chapter where Ichabod and Abby have to go to Steve for help

Lovely story, thanks for sharing :)

That was very amusing! well done. Ichabod and Steve would be great friends. They have the same moral compass.

8belles

Cool idea

I like this a lot! Thank you so much for crossing two such awesome & usually stoic out-of-timers... I do think, as someone has already mentioned, a little more of the contents of Steve's head would have been cool. I'm kinda glad Ichabod noticed Steve wasn't getting drunk - it must have been a horrible day for Steve to even try...

Nice adding the Rip Van Winkle element and you can really see where they worked that into the show and I'm glad you noticed it here.

Excellent and funny!

Soldiers out of time!

First crossover one-shot of Captain America and Sleepy Hallow.

It's so cool!

What a neat meeting of two out-of-time heroes.

One more than the other.

Great work.

love it

This is a very good one-shot.

Hahaha, YES!

Awesome! You brought together my two favorite time travelers and you did it awesomely! Great work!

I do have a couple of critiques though. 1)Even though most people consider it unnessicary, I usually like to describe what the characters are wearing, so that, say, someone knew they were talking to a fellow soldier. And 2)I don't think either of them drink that much. Just saying. But great story anyway!

-Anna

This is wonderful slice of life for two people who have a lot in common, no matter how many years separate them. Beautifully rendered and written, even someone who isn't familiar with Sleepy Hollow (like myself) can easily follow along and get a real sense of Ichabod's character and his 'fish out of water' experience. You give us just enough to understand what's going on, yet we aren't bogged down with too much exposition. In other words, you trust us enough as readers to follow along.

My only critique? The only thing that we needed to 'see' was why Steve knew he was talking to a fellow soldier, so a description of what he was wearing was both desirable and necessary. (Again, not being one of the fandom, I have no idea what his normal garb is at this point in his life, but whatever he was wearing would have to be something distinctive enough to tell an observant person like Steve that he wasn't dealing with a civilian).

I must also commend you on your use of Ichabod's formal language, yes you are using contractions, but they aren't out of place.

I enjoyed your story immensely and I'm glad I stumbled across it .

Missy