Oh my god, just. Just. The entire story, from the beginning line of Caught in the Crossfire to the ending line of Shot in the Dark was just incredible. I cried finishing this one because I knew it was over. This is by far the best story I have ever read and I hope you pursue writing for the rest of your life. You beautifully wrote each and every character and I could connect with all of them. I will no doubt be re-reading these over and over and over again. And the last line of Shot in the Dark. AMAZING! I got chills. Just beautiful writing and story telling.

I wanted to come back and give you a better review than my last. This story is tied with one other to be my absolute favorite stories on this whole website. I think that jim and bones relationship is so well written. I love me some hurt!kirk and bones going absolutely crazy trying to fix him and keep him alive because he's absolutely in love with him. I can also be eternally grateful that you completed them. Thank you thank you for these 2 wonderful stories!

Oh man, this story is so good! I love it. Awesome sequel! I hope you keep writing! Onto your next story :)

this goes straight ahead to my favorite stories!
I love the xentians!
to have another story with them was so awesomeand lots of good h/c with my two most loved characters!
thank you so much for this awesome story! ps: I am a little bit sad about kogas..but it makes the story so much more realistic! great!

Thanks for this ff - I like it a lot, :).
I'm sad to hear that you won't write any more of these but I wish you a lot of fun with the originals! I'm shure they will be great also.

Awe such a great ending to a wonderful story! I'm so glad that Jim, Bones and the others are all okay. Mckirk all the way! I love how much both of them mean to each other. Thank you for all the wonderful chapters you wrote for us fans and you're welcome.

Thank you for such a great story! I looked forward to reading each chapter and enjoyed how Jim and McCoy's love for each other grew stronger with each one.

This is it! I can't believe it's coming to an end.

I totally love how Jim thought he could outsmart McCoy to get some junk food :)) Never going to happen man! Not in this universe and not in any other hahaha

Space spiders- I hope that's not a thing in the future!

I love AOS Pike so bad it hurts, so happy to see him making an appearance. He's right too, Ka'al was a tyrant, cold blood or not he deserved it.

Nibiru... God help us all! ;)

Thanks so much, I have loved every minute of this truly epic story. I really am going to miss reading these guys the way you've written them! You are such a fantastic writer and I wish you luck with the original novel you're going to be working on. And you know, I'm also looking forward to more dissociation, it's a great time :)

Louise xxxx

Hello!

I have been looking forward to reading this over the last few days and as mentioned elsewhere, I'm on a 4 1/2 hour train journey to London for work, so I finally have the time!

I can't tell you how much I laughed when Jim shut Leonard up by kissing him. I know I've mentioned before but these guys are my fav couple, and I love to see them have this time together and enjoy a bit of comfort after everything they've been through.

I don't think I've ever had a plate of treats put in front of me and had enough self restrain not to just finish them, Jim deserves a medal lol

I think I'm going to miss Mak'ai, she's been such a key part of this story and its great to know she has such a promising future ahead!

I'm now off to read the final chapter (3G signal don't let me down now!), obviously I'm really looking forward to it but at the same time I can't believe this story is coming to an end!

Louise :)) xx

Thanks for the story! You are amazing.

Enjoyed the ride and love the ending. Thanks for sharing your story.

Saying goodbye to Mak'ai makes me look back at all they went through. Seems like I lived it with them.

thanks for the update! Always love your stories:)

*sigh* I love your stories!

I love the flashback happy memories