can't wait for the next chapter

can't

the omake is amusing

You're making me cry
There goes any hope of ever coming back.
Dammit, stupid emotions TAT

dang, I was hoping he’d go back. TwT

I really feel like she should have gotten S class. She should at least be able to beat Erza.

came back to early tbh... there is a reason that gildarts only ever showed up at the end. He was a monster and if he was at the guild all the events that were used to make them grow wouldn't have happened as he would just bulldoze through it all.

Same will happen with naruto,

Honestly, all that shit with Oni Teuchi is crap. I won't even develop that point since you made a poll on your profile about the subject.

And I feel that not making any romance would be better for that story. Or at least not with Cana, I don't feel any symbiose between them. It seems more like an older brother and his little sister.

Well, seems pretty good. Can't tell much since this is but the beginning, but I think it has potential.

It wasn't too cliche, don't worry. Well, it IS cliche, but sometimes cliche exist for a good reason, they are good. And I have never nor will ever read a crossover where the MC that is supposed to be transported into another world is born into such world. In that case, might as well say it's not the same character at all and just let they be an OC.

U make him have fox-like appearance and then hope your chapter wasn't cliched... Yes actually, it is.

Sadness and Sorrow for that end-scene...I knew what to expect, just because I've listened to that OST on Piano before, but it still made me tear up.

That was a beautiful scene.

make harem please. naruto x cana, mira erza and maybe ultear in the future upto you. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. you can make cana main ofc but add erza and mira too pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Well, that was interesting wonder who that weak Chakra user was I hope the next time they meet Naruto kills him he somehow knows of Naruto also which is weird.

Well, this was nice Mira's getting into the story more which is nice the pranking is amusing, kinda weird that Gray is closer to Naruto then Natsu I kinda expected it the other way around, Cana is strating to show that she likes Naruto but he still seems dense, I wonder when Lucy will join the story or if she will at all as so far it's before season 1 I think as Mira and Erza were already S-Rank, can't wait for more, I do hope he eventually tells everyone about his past eventually.