| Reviews for The Mob |
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Serulium chapter 1 . 4/27/2015 wow. That was dark. It was very good, a little confusing at some parts, but definitely smoothed out by the end. I liked it very much. |
IcyGhostLlama chapter 1 . 1/28/2015 Hmm... I might say it's a male's POV, but it might be female.. Probably female. :D This... Made me cry SO much! .GOD. Waaaaaaaaa! *Bawls* This is... Beautiful... Heart Heart-breaking... Amazing! I don't wanna read it again in case I have a mental breakdown... BUT I'M GOING TO ANYWAY! DX *Sobs* |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2014 HATE IT! |
Wolf Howl99 chapter 1 . 11/2/2014 It's interesting, but I couldn't tell who's POV it was. I would say maybe one of the nerds But, I know that Danny died in the end, and that's sad. Some one other then Sam Jazz and Tucker should've spoken up. |
Cartwheellou chapter 1 . 10/26/2014 I think the main characters a boy, but this might be similar to my la class. In a book, the gender of the main character was unknown, and all the boys thought it was a girl and all the girls thought it was a boy. I want to rip this story to shreds and hide them, but because of the type of writing, not the writing quality. This was a good story, im just not into suicide stories or ones where dannys parents dont accept him. |
bibliophilea chapter 1 . 10/22/2014 You just unexpectedly broke my heart ... T-T Which means that this is a really great story. The voice in my head was one that could be male, and could be female... but it definitely belonged to a more shy, geeky person, for some reason... |
Phantom J. Ryder chapter 1 . 8/30/2014 To be honest, I felt like the POV was me. I felt this fic reach out and tear my heart to pieces. And I have no idea why. I'd like to congratulate you, but I'm kind of in a daze right now... |
violetinthewater chapter 1 . 3/7/2014 Well, I think it's a girl, but maybe I just believe that because I am one |
Ava Blook chapter 1 . 2/9/2014 Interesting idea - staying in the mob because everyone else is. Pretty well done, too, though the writing isn't perfect. Overall, interesting and better than much of the stuff on here. Well done. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2014 0.0 angst. so, somuch, angst. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. T.T This mad me cry |
Jessica01 chapter 1 . 2/3/2014 I think it's Dash. |
Ruby 1334 chapter 1 . 2/3/2014 Male. I was thinking of ummm... A student from Casper high. One of the geeks/nerds. Anyways: I want to tear it up: Because it upset me deeply. But I don't want to tear it up: Because it's beautifully written and has a great effect and detail. So I'll leave it untouched! :) |
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 2/2/2014 I think the one telling the story might be Dash and this fic is too dark, really wish the mob fond out a little too late what they did. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
Phantom Wolfie chapter 1 . 2/2/2014 Yes it is me. I don't feel like signing in right now. I can't tell if I like it or not (cause danny dies), but I felt that I should review. Nice wording by the way. Great suspense. There were a few things I didn't get though. Anyway, Dash was TOTALLY the person who was telling it. Totally. 'Cause, you know, it said 'third was an African American male.' Or something like that. That, by the way, was probably Kwan he was talking about, and the second person was Star. Anyway, nice job! ... Though I'm still not sure whether I like it or not... Oh well. SMILEY FACES! |
Emmazippy577 chapter 1 . 2/2/2014 o.o I LOVE it! Is this told by Kwan? I think it's told by Kwan. |