Awww. She traveled with the Originals. Poor Bekah, I can imagine her being upset about her having to leave. Oh and the ending of the chapter. *phew* if that’s the first try we’ll... God damn. Nailed it.

Oh snap. Huh. That’s a new concept

please continue this

Holy shit. I know its been a while sense you wrote this but . . . i very much so want to see what happens next

This is by far my top favorite fic I've EVER came across. I wish there was more!

Write more please this is amazing

this was an awesome story!

When you have all three of those men in front of you and wanting you... You are totally allowed to be horn- creative as much as you like! All three are really sexy, hot, need I go on?

Ahahah not bad XD

Hehehe! I am very satisfied, sweetheart. I was hoping that all three would get involved at once and you certainly delivered with that. ;) I loved how she was overly eager at the beginning and started going to town on Seth before the others came back in. Horn-creative. I kinda like that. :D I think you've certainly got this smut thing down.

hahaha lol please update again soon i cant wait to read the next chapter please hurry

Thank you for mentioning at the end who the Mikaelson's were because I was reading it assuming they were some historical figures of some kind. I really had no clue. ()

I really did like the Melissa D'Angeli name. I thought it was a nice variation of her real name.

Okay. The smut. :p So it almost felt a little weird to read it because of how formal it is, but that's the tone of the story, so it makes sense. I'm just used to reading smut in a modern setting with non-dark angels. ;) Anyway, normally my favorite part of reading smut is the dirty talk in the lead up. The taster of smut here didn't really have much...but I actually really enjoyed that. She kind of resigned herself to the fact that it was going to happen, so they really didn't need to seduce her much. I loved the use of the wings as an erogenous zone. Favorite line: "Never had any intention of stopping, darling." Urk. Oh, and any time you write Ambrose breathing into someone's ear or neck when he talks, I'm going to love it. I think that's a requirement of any Ambrose smut. There's just something about it and that damn voice of his.

The final chapter better be some hardcore foursome action, or I will be highly disappointed. ;)

Very hot interaction between Mel and her brothers! I cannot wait for the next installment. Oh the smut is easy if you just let your mind get past the insecurity of writing it. And I'm sorry for your personal problems...that is never a good time to go through that mess and I feel for you.

Please update soon i cant wait to read the next chapter, please hurry i really wanna know what happens next

I think you could have something interesting here. I know it'll be a more serious sort of story, but I can almost see a weird sitcom coming out of it, like she ends up living with some dude in an apartment, the boys find her and live next door, constantly trying to mate with her but the roommate always shows up at the last minute. () I kind of imagine them looking like Loki and Bartleby from Dogma with the wings and all.