I’ve never understood why Hercule’s behaviour was always just allowed. Vegeta would never sit back and let such a useless weakling call the Super Saiyan transformation a ‘trick of the light’, a cheating move. Gohan and the rest of the Z-fighters wouldn’t care that they didn’t get credit, but Hercules taking credit that wasn’t his and then not only besmirching their names and their efforts, but making it so Goku would be remembered as a lying cheat when he gave his life to save them all. It goes beyond being an attention whore. Hercule lacks empathy.

7 months later still depressed u ended it lmao

Ah, i am really sorry to read this AN. Your story is really entertaining. I've particularly like how 'real' the interactions are. How 'real' Gohan's reaction and thinking.

Can you recommend some DBZ fanfics out there? Tq

Huh, feeling a person's personality by his/her Ki. That is some advance stuff right there... whoaa

One thing i wonder about this Satan. Did he truly believed his lie, i.e. He beat Cell? Or he just get loud to drown out that small voice inside his head?

Loved the short conversation with Videl. Good points.

How many styles Gohan knows anyway?

I’m still depressed you ended this smh

I really hate how Hercule is. I like him as a character enough, I guess, but he's flashy, annoying, and in this story, he's basically a bully. Goku was better than him so he stamped all over his name, and Chi-Chi even pointed out that Gohan fighting and winning in tournaments would threaten the 'champ' and what would happen them? MASSACRE OF GOHAN'S REPUTATION :)

Hercule Satan is an over arrogant bully, that's all there is to it. He needs to be put in his place, regardless of character. I want one story, just ONE where Goku's name is cleared and Hercule apologizes for his lies. I wouldn't care so much about what Hercule did if he didn't mock Goku to do it.

J'ai aimé.

Okay, I just have to comment - Waves and Rocks (cough-TOEI-cough) made me laugh so hard.

Thanks for writing!

Gonna have to agree with Hercule on Gohan needing a back bone. Dude needs to show who runs this place.

I liked this and hope to read chasing demons soon

Hmm... I would recommend leaving "Chapter 15" because nothing irritates me more than a story just dropping off with no explanation whatsoever. So, as a courtesy to your readers, please leave the explanation of why it's over. When I get a reason, I completely understand. But when they say nothing, that just ticks me off. Anyway, good story, I'll definitely read Chasing Demons when I have the time; I had a leisurely few days to read this one from start to finish, but my life's about to get more busy again. Later! :D

I plan to read Chasing Demons as soon as I can.

And of course the first thing that produces a feeling stong enough that it makes me feel like reviewing this story would be just a pet peave of mine

There wasn't really an internet around when DBZ was written soooo there is no internet in the DBZ world

There are no cellphones
There are no blueray players.

This is a pet peeve of mine that I thought was avoided when Videl was still given a floppydisk like thing instead of a CD.

I know it's not important in the grand sceam of things. To me it's almost as bad as doing current pop culture references.