This is getting very interesting and I’m eager to see more of it!

heres an idea include vanitas...Id love to how that works out.

Just finished powering through all of what's written so far. I really enjoyed what I've read so far. Here's hoping this story doesn't die any time soon.

I LOVE this story. I can't wait to read more! HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE D: (Take your time, I just really wanna read more)

It's been awhile since you've updated, but I'll review anyway.

I like this story so far, the start was shakey with how loose lipped Roxas and Ventus were, but you've developed as a writer over time and I can appreciate that. I especially like the fact that Weiss has a legitimate reason to be wary of Roxas instead of some flimsy excuse to cause drama.

My only regret is that Ven's been pushed to the wayside completely at this point. I get that Roxas is having issues right now, but as far as Ven knows his only two friends are dead and missing right now. I'm kind of miffed that his story isn't getting any attention. (Ven is my favorite KH character if you couldn't tell.)

Toss Vanitas at the crew some time, I'm sure that'd be interesting. It'd be easy to shoe him in, being half of Ventus and all, he'd probably find a way to hitch a ride to Vale as well.

I dunno, things to think about! I just want to see if you'll ever continue this story. Have fun doing what you do, and maybe I'll see you later! Bye!

It's been too long, please update ASAP.

Update!

quit bitching start updating

Please update soon, I'm interested to see what happens next.

ROXAS IS LOVE ROXAS IS LIFE!Side note...I LOVE THIS STORY THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS IT"S MY FAVORITE FANFICTION CROSSOVER WITH ROXAS!

I feel like Roxas is gonna end up with Weiss...Or Xion...I perfer Xion...ROXAS IS LOVE ROXAS IS LIFE!

It makes complete sense for there to be Heartless, actually. The world of Remnant is probably more aligned towards darkness then most, and the Grimm strongly resemble the Unversed from BBS.

Have to be honest, I actually agree with Weiss on this. He is an enigma. Someone who was part of an organization and later turned on said organization. Its easy to see why you shouldn't lower your guard around him.

The part where he had flashbacks to The Castle That Never Was, was cool. It was a sterile prison that would sooner have him terminated than him leaving. And the part where they didn't even view themselves as living just made it feel more miserable. Awesome world to do a battle though.

wow i honestly thought this was dead glad to see it isnt. and from what ive reread in the past i dunno hour or so im still invested in the plot and where your taking this (just hoping you dont pair roxas with weiss im not seeing too much chemestry there be it intentional or not. personaly roxas and xion was always my KH otp) but i hope there isnt another more 358 day gap between updates ps. i regret nothing

This went... pretty much how I pictured it(which is a good thing) now the only Question is who will follow him if anyone

Oh and my name?...I was bored and decided to make it bigger

Meow out