Really gets you right here. *art* Very well done.

Absolutely tragic. :( And perfect! I loved how Fili and Kili died defending Thorin, just as they were supposed to. Fili's thought patten and Thorin's final action signifying Fili's death ... No, I think I will cry here. Beautiful story.

Great story.

You've got Fili perfectly. A very nice piece of work.

Amazing ... I cried. I loved how Fili remembered everything before he died.

T_T you broke my heart...very well done though )