Why are all of the best ones gone forever? I wish you would come back and finish this. I love the first person narrative. You capture them so well. *sigh*

OMG this is beautiful and if feels like the exact fanficton I need keep myself in denial of Misty being trapped in hell.

Thanks so much for sharing your time and talents. Hoping that you come back to this piece-it's poignant and lovely in all the best ways.

Such a good chapter. I love how when you switch between them, I can distinctly hear each one of them. Misty's dialect is strong and I just love being able to get that from your words. I still really love how they're connecting to each other in small bits. It still breaks my heart when I think about Misty being stuck there forever and this other room that she found just makes it hurt more. I love this and can't wait for more.

This is interesting and I look forward to more.

It's been almost a week and I still can't get over Misty's fate, I love this fic is so well written and in character, can't wait for the rest :)

this is great! please continue

Oh, wow. This is amazing. The way you have them still connecting to each other, is beautiful.
Can't wait for more!

Wow, this was great. Descriptive, perfect length, and suspenseful. Usually I don't like first person fics, especially with alternating points of view, but this is so well done. I hope you write more soon.