Still love this!

You don't really see that many KD stories and when yours I got super pumped. Your story is so good and I would love to read more KD and izzy story. I love the sibling relationship between izzy and Luke it's nice and it's something that I have been trying to find.

Love it

Great story!

Love it!

GREAT STORY WOULD LOVE TO SEE MORE DIZZI IN STEP UP 4 LOL

LOVE IT SO MUCH!

Amazing...simply amazing! I love what you did with the story and I admit it, I loved the Izzy and Luke and Izzy and KD interactions. Amazing job buddy, keep up the great work.

Wow, this story was seriously brilliant. Probably one of the best ones I've read here, and not just specifically step up fanfics. I love how genuine you made Izzy and how she and Luke had such a great sibling relationships. I also love the " We're not going there yet," phrase that Izzy and Danny share, it's completely adorable. I could probably continue this all day but alas it must end at some point. Fantastic story :)

Ah! This was so nice!

I really enjoyed this story, despite the grammar errors and whatnot, it was good. The relationship development was great and in its own way—refreshing. I really liked the dynamic between everyone and I'm glad there was more of a focus on Luke, than anyone else. Usually people over elaborate Moose and anything involving him—not that I hate it, he's my favorite and I love him since Step Up 2—but yknow, the story isn't about him? I don't really know hoe to explain it, but this was just a really good story.

Just be sure to proofread it later, or on any free time, alright? I don't want to seem mean, but perfection comes from practice and proofreading. Anyway, thanks for giving me this experience, you're a doll.

Yay. I'm excited for the final scene.

Okay, first—DanielIzzy is going to be a thing now, since they're auditioning and second—she's found her place. I totally squealed a little, when he told her about the Duo offer and how he told her she was born to dance. It's perfect, adorable actually, and I hope these two are able to last after the World Jam. Anyway, now little Dizzy can spin on her head, huh? I guess this makes for an awesome dance sequence.

The grammar still looks very unpolished, but all those errors can disappear with a little proofread. It's nothing that you can correct later, because as great as a story is, it's never perfected until it's read a second time. Yeah? Yeah.

I'm happy. I'm really happy.

I love the direction this story has, and the route it's taking. Danny sure knows how to impress a girl and I love how it smooth and discreet he is, while he does it. He didn't even have to say those special three words to her and she already knew what he meant just by his implication. It's smooth and discreet all the while, guess this means my crush for Daniel is showing?

Grammar—good, though could be better—and story is well in all it's ways. You should be proud of your continuous ability to give exactly what the reader wants and needs. I'm loving it, also excited to see if Izzy takes the Duo offer.

See?

I had a feeling Daniel didn't mean harm, but nevertheless, he's still really foolish for standing her up. He knew that as a 'boyfriend' the least he could do was talk to her. Oh this ship, it sinks into the bottom of the sea.

Anyway, onto the story, this chapter was really good and I enjoyed it, despite the lot. I just think you should proofread the story whenever you have free time, there's a lot of errors and it stiffs the flow of the story. It kind of makes it hard to read sometimes, despite how good the story might be.

Gee. This is the part in the movie, where everything goes wrong.

I'm happy the dynamic between Izzy and Luke is still well, but my ship, why have you sunken the ship? I actually thought Danny liked her, and in some thought, wanted to be with her and all that jazz. I hope this is just some insecurity she has, like perhaps Danny can't visit her, because he's also busy—though, I highly doubt it.

Anyway, grammatical errors are present, as well as some words, so yeah.

It's funny, because the brother/sister dynamic Luke and Izzy have is something I've been wishing to read in a story. It's nice to see this here, and I'm glad the story is actually completed so I don't have to worry on waiting and all that. I do suggest you return to it and edit it grammar wise, there's a lot of word choice or missing periods you have here.

Anyway, the story's nice! You did a great job.