| Reviews for Yuki and Yuno's happy end |
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  Akise chapter 3 . 5/6/2019 DUHN DUHN DUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNN Yukis parents: DDDDDAAAAAAAAANNNNNMMMMMMMMMM Yunos parents that are erased from existense: Thats our girl! |
| chris chapter 3 . 3/12/2018 cant wait for par t4 when is it gonna come out |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2017 Oh my Jesus this is amazing |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/23/2017 Loved it, will you be posting anymore? |
 Wheatley9001 chapter 3 . 4/2/2017 Yuno x Yuki romance stories are few. This is probably the best one I've read! Awesome job! But seriously, it's been 3 years since you said a week. We're ready for another update. I mean it, it's not funny anymore. |
| Dani d 167 chapter 3 . 12/22/2016 Aaaaaahhhhhh I fell like a fan girl more please you did amazingly good work on this please continue well bye for now •_• |
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/29/2016 Next chapter please |
| CrystalDev chapter 3 . 7/23/2016 How they o-only did it once?! How on earth is she pregnant? |
| mariannesinger16 chapter 3 . 7/22/2016 ... Okay, that last bit was a little cute. But um... You do know that even the 'god' in this Anime can't bring dead people back to life, right? 0 u 0 So Hinata, Mao, Akise, and Yuki's parents are forever dead. They could not have been there. Okay, so this story wasn't horrible. I felt though, that the little confession with Akise here was a bit unnecessary, (just as was the love triangle in this show) but I can see why you put it in. Also, it was the First World Yuno who committed suicide. Not the Second. The Second was killed by First World Yuno. And there are so many misspellings and grammar mistakes, auugh... 3/10. I encourage you to keep writing and try to get better. I hope to see maybe another Yukki x Yuno fanfic from you and see if you at least to apostrophes and the right 'there/their' next time. :) |
| mariannesinger16 chapter 2 . 7/22/2016 ... This chapter was the worse. I'm sorry, but... slipping from past-tense to present-tense over and over, who the hell is Janet, no apostrophes, you used the wrong 'there/their,' and you didn't even bother to spell one right... The grammar- augh- augh... I'm so sorry... If their wedding is not the most adorable thing I have ever seen, I am going to be super pissed. |
| mariannesinger16 chapter 1 . 7/22/2016 Ah, the ever classic 'forgetting to proofread' cliche. How charming to see it again. Oh, and no apostrophes, either, nice. Oh and a lack of commas, also wonderful. And you mixed their names up towards the end, also... All that aside... Okay first chapter. Nothing great, but it certainly wasn't gosh awful. I'm not bashing, I'm just letting you know that you need to proofread. Spell check is your best friend, and we have it here on the site. Use it! But it's an okay first chapter. YUKKI AND YUNO FINALLY GOT TO SEE THE STARS! I'll see how this goes. |
| arow2daknee chapter 3 . 7/21/2016 3 words - So much EMOTION What makes this better Is the fact I'm listening to Here with You at the same time, one request. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS it is arch a great story! I dont want it to end. |
| John cina chapter 3 . 7/7/2016 Add some shit hit the fan stuff |
| Attaria Himmel chapter 3 . 7/7/2016 Love it, plz do more, i really like the idea you got |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/22/2016 I loved it all! |
