Did the Sisterhood really just kick Josh out of the room, away from his new baby and wife the day after a premature birth? Kinda mean.

What the heck? Why did you stop writing?

I love the Sam calling Mom "Mom" stuff, but Elisa is not a Jewish name.

Josh would never call him "Bartlet" - it's President Bartlet.

Not bad on the religion stuff but you should have had him give that Old Testament stuff that the President gave to that Dr. Laura (or whatever her name was) nut.

The sudden disappearance of quotation marks is making this rather more difficult to follow.

This chapter was adorable, but I cannot imagine trying to drive safely with that sort of distraction.

I absolutely LOVE this story (and, though I've failed to comment before, I love the rest of your stories as well)! I know it's been a few years ago but I really hope you get back to writing for The Joshua Monologues!

Hello spitzthecat,

I just wanted to say that you are doing a very good job with this story. I love how Josh works with Donna and family, it's a lot of fun to read.

I noticed that for the past few chapters there appears to be no quotation marks around the spoken sentences. It was fine for the first chapter or so but now it's getting slightly tiring trying to figure out what are the spoken sentences and what are the thoughts. If you are working on this with a tablet or smartphone instead of a computer, may I make the small suggestion to send it to your e-mail so you can read it on a computer and put in the quotation marks. It makes it a lot more easier to read that way.

Once again you have done such a wonderful job on this story and portraying the characters and I hope you will finish it. With that much said, I'll let you be. If you do have any questions about anything or wish to discuss this review please feel free to pm me. I love getting messages from people. :)

Thank you! And I hope you are doing well.
hpswst101

I know it's seven years later, but I just wanted to say that I very much enjoy the family you created here! Fun story about my favorite couple :)

"Our post-coital make-out session is much less frenzied then the sex it follows." - "much less frenzied than the sex".

"Carol brought the books for the baby pool to tell us Senator Howard Stackhouse had picked the correct date, sex and had the closest weight. He wanted us to know he was planning to donate the money, in our name, to a charity called Cure Autism Now." - Yay! for senator Stackhouse.

"The change in the creaking of the floorboards indicates Josh is now wandering through the living room and his talk with David is drown out by the sound of the heat kicking on." - "his talk with David is drowned out".
"I'm loathe to disturb them," - "I'm loath to disturb them,".

"so Joanie plugged machine in and started it" - "plugged the machine in".

"I'd imagine he's not to keen on Leo or I right now." - "he's not too keen".