raven hissing saying telling yelling to garfield wth is wrong with you why are you trying to kill yourself slap listen up my idiot boyfriend stop trying to kill yourself ok

You hit a point not many do that made it realistic, you can't garuntie a suicidal person will never try again regardless of promises, feelings stay. I wish it wasn't like that but things don't go in an instant with a single promise.

I LOVE that song. Its very touching,The story.

why is there a bunch of random letters, numbers and percentages in between the sentences

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Pretty damn good.

this actually had me sobbing into my bed...

i liked it

Before I go on to my actual review, I would like to point out that the Teen Titans are from DC Comics. Not Marvel. Never Marvel. Marvel sucks (sorry if you're a fan... Who am I kidding? I'm not sorry; Marvel does suck).

Moving on from that, the grammar and spelling are okay, and there is nothing significantly wrong in that area. There are a few places throughout the story where you didn't quite use correct punctuation (meaning you either put apostrophes in the wrong places, or you didn't add one at all when it was needed). You also capitalized a few words when they didn't require capitalization, though I believe that only occurred maybe once.

The characters, more specifically Raven (though Beast Boy had his moments too), were quite a bit out of character, and that really interfered with my level of enjoyment for the story. Raven would typically try to refrain from showing as much emotion as she did here, and would not so openly express here feelings to anyone without some form of deep trust. Cyborg is practically a brother to her, and she doesn't even really share her thoughts with him. As for Beast Boy, he is depressed in this story, so I can let his behavior slide. There's really nothing wrong there.

Please know that I am not trying to be mean, or flame this story what-so-ever. This is a good piece of work, and I understand that every story has its flaws. I wrote this review to help you become a better writer, so that you will be successful with your stories in the future. I hope you will take what I have written into consideration, and shape yourself into the sublime writer I know you can be. This fanfic has already displayed the potential that you contain within yourself. I hope to read more from you sometime soon!

Kudos, and good luck!

Teen Titans and Three Days Grace are awesome, so I obviously loved this.
Great job.

Teen Titans are a DC thing not Marvel but yeah alright story

I've been in love with this song ever since I've first heard it. It reminds me of the dark times of my life. But like the song says: "It's never too late!"

bb should have said i'm no one's pet

I LOVED IT! Hey and don't forget to check my fanfictions and please review.
TOODLES! :3