Excellent story here! It was short yet full of action. Fantastic last chapter but it's kind of sad that they couldn't consummate after all that crap they went through for no god damn reason apart from a lack in COMMUNICATION!

Great story!

Cheers

Keep Writing

A very sweet story :)

story very well written

Whoo! Great work, you made it so believable and that was a good approach in overcoming their conflict. They truly are star-crossed lovers, in more ways than one. I definitely liked it very much.

Wow.. I thought Squall was way too harsh there.. I was really shocked that he called her all those offensive names. It's interesting, but I have to wonder how these two will ever patch their relationship up now..

Great story! I think you should make a sequel, but that's just me.
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this is a really great story, not many stories i have read can make me feel how the character feels. it really is a great story, keep up the good work and i hope u write more ff8 fanfics. i especially like to read squinoa fics. can't wait to read ur other fics. o_-

awsome begining. keep up the good work!

You know, I had read this the first time it was out. And still, the subject matter was considered taboo by most...you handled it with dignity. Somehow, it wasn’t the main focus of the story, but the relationship of two people was the central point. It shows how they learned to deal with their feelings, and maybe they needed the reality to bring them back together. This was one of the first turning points of your writing, and each endeavor has only seemed to gain maturity. Plus, I have to say, the slight bits of humor are always welcome…love the ‘autographed picture of Bahamut’ it is a classic in its own right.

Bob, yet again, I have just got to say "wow"

-Quis.

I almost cried reading the 5 chapter! Butm I always love happy endings! Especially in my state of anxiety and depression. Good job! _

Sincerly,

Mystik

I remember reading this awhile back, and I plan to read all of your work. I was really fond of the way you decided to write this one. Love it! _~

I think I've found it! The one story that can make me cry . . . that was beautiful! I never thought the one story would be an R rated one, though.

. . . I don't know what to say anymore . . . it was . . . beautiful . . . simply beautiful . . .