This...amazing.
It's making me cry for some reason.

I like this, but the stupid Ripley’s ad. in the corner of the screen is currently obstructing my view of this amazing story.

You know I was always thinking of a story about the stoll brothers being truly epic like Connor being a genius but smarter than Toney stark and Jimmy neutron combind but not very strong but being the smartest being that has ever lived and whom has ever will live and travis being a great fighter like beating batman and Bruce Lee in fights and let's percy win their sword fights and was able to awaken the power of Zeus I got this idea after reading controlling secrets you know how you hear how travis always gets beat bye his mom to protect Connor well what about he is force to take deadly missions and assassin missions and was proving he was the best just so Connor wouldn't have to do them hey can you make this into a challenge

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Ohhh I can see this happening! Poor Travis having that dream about them falling

THAT WAS SO SO AWESOME HAPPY FACES EVERYWHERE YOU ARE INCREDIBLE!

Very good I was wondering about the napkin and now I know so thank you.

AHHHH THAT WAS SO GOOD! I love how you pieced this together! :D

You know you really should have done one where RED meets the Romans

Very good! I wish you did more on it! I really like the ending!

It was amazing. The plot is interesting, even if you put it in "Parody", it was, in my opinion, perfect. Kinda like good ol' PJO series.
Can you continue? Please?
Beth11
P.S. The characters aren't really OOC. Actually, I don't really imagine the Stoll brothers being dumb or oblivious, but kinda smart.

I REALLY loved this, because I always wondered how exactly Connor found out about the note and what happened after that. Really really good, I think you got the characters' personalities down pat! Travis was maybe a little too serious but that was understandable considering the situation, and Connor is underestimated in my opinion, so I think he probably is that smart and people just don't see it.

this was perfection! great job! :)

I liked this. No I didn't think Conner was to smart or Travis to serious.

Nah, I think they were perfect. I mean, Travis can be serious-ish, right? :) I loved everything after the prophecy. Not that I didn't love the rest, but those were my favourite parts. Love the end as well, but you might want to try changing the way Travis said 'Just as they were...' I sometimes think that people don't make their characters sound like they're talking, more like they'e narrating. Your dialogue was awesome, but just that part was off, is all. I really loved it, great idea on making the mention into a fic. :) Keep writing!