i loved your ending

Yep. That was officially the most fulfilling thing I've ever read. Thank you, I can now go watch Allegiant and hope to god they twisted the ending in the movie so it matches up to yours. You're welcome world.

'your welcome world' xD

I agree with you there the ending in the book sucked.

Maybe, they found a way of bringing her back to life after the end of the book?
That's what I like to think anyways.

Nice, not quite Roth's touch, but great writing skills. I would have much preferred for Allegiant to end this way.

I finished the third book two days and could barely get out of bed since (i know i take books too seriously), but now this ending is the real ending to me. Thank you!

Thank you greatly for this I literally just finished allegiant and the sucked completely suck monkey balls

Actually, I think the original ending was amazing. Through the whole series Triss was trying to figure out what sacrifice really means. And anyone who says that it should have ended in a different way didn't learn a thing from all three books.

Thank you

make chapter 2 please

Thanks so much

Thank goodness you wrote this! I was so mad the she killed tris off. Really! -what kind of point does that make? There was already enough sacrifice in the book. She should have let tris leave showing that determination and a good heart pays off or something!

I cried at the end of the book. And I can't stop. The ending in the book is so fucked up.
I like your ending it's how I wanted the book to end. so maybe I can go to sleep nou peacefully
xx lotte

This is EXACTLY what should have happened. This ending is just great!