LOVED it. The way you described Levi's thoughts and actions was perfect. Awful and sad. Great job ;)

Beautiful. I could visualize it and you got into character so well. I love the mood of it, too.

Wow! Fantastic, you are awesome in writing, really you are! How you described Levi's thoughts that were circling around the death of his comrade and always this blood...wow,wow, wow..totally awesome

Oh wow, this was heart wrenching but good!