K-Skyes!

Wow! I'm so happy to see this story back in business! I can't believe it's been 5 years since I last reviewed. You and Raven's Wing both have inspired me to pick the quill back up and revamp my own unfinished stories . (Speaking of which, I updated "Adelaide"! Check it out when you have a chance!)

I'm eager to see what Dutchess is planning in that skull of hers. I love this story, and I'm going to re-read the whole thing when I've the chance! So glad to see its triumphant return! .

Love the story. You've done a great job developing the characters, and I like seeing a more sensitive side of Spot. Please update!

A I LOVE IT

KEEP GOING

i likeit what is going to happened?

dang you and you cliff hangers!

:)

you have to update soon, i don't think i can wait much longer!

ack, you're amazing, just thought i'd let you know

Oh wow! I am speechless...I have to take a minute and pull my thoughts together! WOW! That was great! I so didn't see the traitor in Brooklyn thing coming...and wow her father actually disowned her! Not to mention the fact that Spot has to be wondering if she is actually pregnant and who the father is...WOW! That was an amazing chapter! I am so glad that you finally updated! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't take long for your next update!

Okay ...you have to update the story! Please don't take another five years! I want to know what the Queens leaders have planned and more importantly if Spot and Dutchess end up together! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Nice story! Spot better come back safe and sound! I bet the battle's gonna last longer, so Dutchess is gonna join in. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

So let's see...when you posted this story, you said the next chapter would be out in a month...and if I look at when you last update...that should mean that i should be seeing a chapter 8 down there by now! *growls* or maybe i just can't count. _ Anywayz, this story rocks socks. Spot's cute, he's a sweetheart with Skyes, I have a feeling something bad's going to happen and that I'll be yelling in next chapter's review. hahaha, but i SWEAR, if you kill either Spot or Skyes, I will...I will...I WILL DO SOMETHING RASH! Muahaahahah! Alrite, alrite. enough of those bananas. PLEASE, SKYES, PLEASE UpDATE SOONE!

~m.d.

Ah. A war! They always seem to come about when Spot and the girl are so close to getting hitched. In my story "Sugar and Spice...", as Spot is proposing to the girl he loves, a messenger newsie comes running up to him yelling about how the boroughs are at war. _ *sigh* I just wanted Skyes and Spotty to be happy and lovey-dovey. Stupid war. *kicks trash can* Aw, by the way, i LOVE the fact that Spot's a God-fearing Newsie. Mega Points for that one, kiddo. (lol, i call youse kiddo like you're younger than me when I'M actually 3 years younger) Anywho, Spot is such a sweetheart. _ Can't wait for that honeymoon chapter. Muaha.

~m.d.

OMG! You didn't get a single review for the last chapter? WHY NOT! *throws rocks at all the people who forgot to review* I give you props, Skyes, this is one cute story. _ Spot is so ADORABLE! Muahahaha. Heya, your lil' fic here inspired me to write one of my own based along the same storyline of Spot and his girl having to keep their relationship a secret. It's called 'Ever Forgiving'. Read it when youse get a chance, mmkay? Tell me what ya think. _ Anywho, I don't like Mr. Skyes anymore. What a jerk. Sam is nice though. He deserves a cookie. i think that's the first time the guy a damsel in distress was forced to marry was actually nice. o, except in 'sweet home alabama'...both guys were nice in that. _ great movie. alrite...onto the next chapter!

~m.d

Michael Andrew Conlon ~ I was like, why the heck does that name sound so friggin familiar and then I remembered that my friend's name is Michael Andrews...hahaha. Anywho...*thinks*..isn't Kathryn's last name Skyes? Cause that's her dad's last name...*confusion* Ya really got me here with all this confusion...like, I didn't know that Dutchess was Kathryn's newsie name until she actually said she was getting married and then I had to read that part again 'cause I initially thought Spot was being nice to her in a friendly manner...*smiles* But it's all good. YaY! No premarital sex! i should uphold those standards in my stories, lol. Well...I guess there's hope yet in my newer ones. This is adorable though, I dont think it's THAT fluffy. I mean, jez, Spot Conlon can't be all womanizing ALL the time! _ More more more!

~m.d.

Aw, Kathryn is not youse? I was about to commend you on having seduced the Brooklyn leader. _ Aw, I like Kathryn's relationship with her father. It's just nice, like at least he's not some jerk of a guy forcing his daughter to do something for his own benefit. At least he's doing it for her own good. *pouts* But what about ol' Spotty. : ( Must...read...more...

~m.d.

Chauvinistic ~what's that mean? lol. _

~m.d.